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[bynine]

9 characters from various different artists in my style! sorry about the wait, this one was a toughie... can you spot the chain of events?

(featuring the following characters [top left to bottom right]: sam from @ultrayurso on twitter, olivia from @daviddrawsgood, ginger from @docninj, iva from @matthew-benham, toddy from @none-aplicable, chlora from @via-star, a chimera-ostrich chimera from @chimeride, a velvet ant fakemon from @bonelessnerd, and aco-aco from @linkandorf!)

[colemckenzies]

docninj replied to your post “how 2 write a bottle episode when ur two biggest writing flaws are...”

Don't know if it's possible in your episode, but you can use time-skips to give you smaller scenes within the larger one? That or find some other things to bookend stuff ( conversation topics, outside stimuli, etc) to give yourself a sort of cheat in structuring the whole thing

yeah it’s the same problem i have with just Normal Writing as well in that i only ever have One Thing when for it to work there needs to be Lots Of Things going on. in this case it’s a paranoia thing where they just accuse each other of stuff and it gets tighter and tenser but like. for 20 mins. so probably not time skips in this case but there definitely needs to be more threads happening and an actual strong overarching thread with Definite Moments on it

[batmobile]

Jarrod 😎

B) this is the least cohesive playlist ive ever made B)just - streetlight manifestoall the pretty girls - kaleorock bottom - neck deepreflections - misterwivesocean eyes - billie eilishdaft pretty boys - bad sunssend me ur name and i’ll make a playlist out of it! also feel free to send a theme/feeling if u like :)