#dsdn101.p3.final

[jpen2]

My final storyboard.

[jpen2]

For this project I decided to focus on the slum challenge as I have been to Inda and experienced the slums first-hand. Originally I wanted to incorporate some of the photos I took while there, but as I worked on it, things changed and they did not suit the overall makeup of my clip.

I chose to use recyclable materials for my clip as recycling reduces waste that is often in slum areas. The audio clip I used, was sourced from http://www.jamendo.com/ and has a creative commons licence.

[sc0ttyeast0n]

Student Critique

I really like how simple, yet informative your brief is. It gets straight to the point and is very easy to understand.

The step by step procedure in the brief also links really well with the storyboard. 

The use of card board in your story board is a really good use of material, as it links to your whole idea around the card board box and homeless person.

The first scene in your progress clip was a little too fast, and the sound was a little stop-start/pitchy which made it hard to grasp what was actually happening. If it was not for the storyboard I would have found it hard to understand.

Good luck with your final clip, I hope you do really well with it.