All of those sound almost right but not exactly right? But thank you!
I think this is probably the best course of action. That and “stop obsessing over it and move on and write the remaining six thousand words of this story and then worry about it during edits,” perhaps 😅
Currently there is more discussion of FEMA assistance and insurance payouts than kissing, so I gotta fix that at one point too, probably. No one but me cares about FEMA response to supernatural/otherworldly disasters.













