Over the holiday break @lyme-lemon took the time to back over Chapter 1 and fix one of its more glaring issues. That of course being the clusterfuck of an exposition dump that was page 22. Ultimately I feel she has greatly improved upon the pacing of this scene and made it more easily readable. So these now serves as pages 22-24 of Chapter 1 and I’ve updated the album should anyone like a refresher course. https://imgur.com/a/WdTIY
Here is the original page 22 for comparison.
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