melon, peach
{ melonYou are a vastly talented writer with an obvious and very clear understanding of who your character is, how she operates, what is important to her; her personality and voice and character are always consistent and always a joy to read peachI love that you’ve not only created a well-rounded and engaging OC—something that’s already so difficult—but that you’ve done it with a child character. That’s so challenging, and normally would be difficult for others to RP with, but you do it so well and you have made Averill such a rich persona that it’s easy to forget that she’s a child, and easy to create wonderful and engaging stories with her!}