Aug 17, 2017
“how did this part end up breaking 1000 words” /eyes Cabanela’s drunken mental tirades that just kind of...happened. “Ah. Yes.”
#my ramblings#writing#um oops?#he got cranky#I mean with good reasons#but#and cars are apparently evil#except Jowd's#Jowd: the mighty exception to all rules#If I even keep this pfft#part 2... or chapter 2 I don't know how I'm going to end up splitting all this got longer than the first part#dangerous games#I probably have so much editing and fixing to do yipes#and still not happy with Jowd talk/interrogation