Hi y'all! Recently, RWBY YouTuber Faboover made a new RWBY video in the style of the American programming block, Toonami. This time it's of volume 9, chapter 5 of the Japanese dub and I once again helped provide English translations. Please take a look.
End Card made by Samster299
Music: "Music: "Arpeggio" by Jackson and His Computer Band
Prior RWBY Toonami fan-made promo from Faboover that I helped provide translatons for:
(JP) RWBY Volume 9 - Toonami (Fan-Made) Promo
Music: "Rosies" by Amon Tobin
Other fan-made RWBY Toonami promos from Faboover:
English & Japanese versions of RWBY: Ice Queendom [Prologue] - Toonami (Fan-Made) Promo
Music: "Everything Is Under Control (DJ Kentaro Remix)" by Coldcut
English & Japanese versions of RWBY: Ice Queendom [Main Story] - Toonami (Fan-Made) Promo
Music: "Toxisphere" by Ethereal Universe
English & Japanese versions of RWBY: Ice Queendom Ep. 10 - Toonami (Fan-Made) Promo
Music: "Mayuri" by Gold Panda
Thoughts - RWBY Vol. 6: Design Pt. 2/2 (Feedback of editing of script provided by me)
The Apathy: Influences, Design & Implementation
Ruby VS The Furious Cat - The EVOLUTION of Shot | Reverse Shot
Yang VS Adam - A Brief Animation BREAKDOWN
Over-Analyzing Kissing in RWBY for ALMOST 15 Minutes
Here's a video that I've been meaning to make for years. With this year being Toonami's 25th Anniversary on Cartoon Network and 10th Anniversary on Adult Swim, I decided it was high time I got this made. This is inspired by the "Lessons Animation Taught Us" Trend that started a few years ago by Movies with Mickey over on FilmJoy. Hope you enjoy!
If you ever get the Bluray or DVD of RWBY Volume 1, watch the Director's Commentary for the episode in which Jaune apologizes to Pyrrha. You will not be sorry! It is my favorite moment of Monty Oum ever.
I will let y’all know if I see it! Director’s Commentary is always fun to watch/listen to. Gives insight into the story and stuff. And y’all know how I feel about background info.
I have my reasons as to why I’ve been largely quiet and inactive over in the realms of Tumblr, but one thing I want to mention is that I helped with the script behind-the-scenes for Faboover’s most recent video:
Thoughts: RWBY Vol. 6 - Design Pt. 2/2
This is something he has poured much time and research into, the kind that I really,
REALLY
wish I saw more of elsewhere in RWBY discourse. This video of his spends time getting into the nitty-gritty of how and why various visual effects in RWBY, past-&-present, turn out the way they day. Some things he covers include:
The various media software used for RWBY’s production across the years and what goes into what (hint: It’s NOT just Poser and then the Maya “engine”)
How compositing was done the first couple of years and how that changed since then
What cards and simulations are and how they have contributed to the production
How lighting effects have been done over the years
How maiden eyes were used in volume 5
How intricate compositing can be
Of course, this is all part 2, so do check out Faboover’s part 1 video first if you haven’t already done so.
2 years ago I started making critical content on my YouTube channel for RWBY. Since then, I’ve wanted to take the time to go over how I started, what I have learned and how I have changed my approach to make these types of videos.
(If you choose to read this, know that it is long and the videos I link to accumulate to around 2 hours)
Let’s start with the why. I’ve been wanting to make a series of videos expressing my thoughts and opinions on various topics for a good while before I actually started. I did have some videos talking about Titanfall (before it released) and how I wanted a change of pace with the games I played. But, these videos weren’t fully what I wanted, and were really not all that good. I wanted to officially start my “Thoughts” series by making a video called, “Why am I Here?” I still want to make that video. Then, I wanted to make a video talking about Destiny, which would’ve ended up as a Rant. I think I still have the footage I recorded to make that video. *Checks saved video files* NOPE, it’s gone now… WAIT! I actually do still have the 3 hour video recording. Anyway, I never actually went through with making those videos. Said I would through an Update video, never did.
Then, RWBY Volume 4 happened, and there was heated discussion. This was when I first noticed the RWDE tag. Reading and watching other’s posts and videos about the show, I decided that I would make my own videos talking about RWBY Vol. 4, but it would be in a much different format compared to how I handled videos like this before. No more rambling about a topic just trying to get through my points while on camera! (I would later break that streak) With a new goal set, RWBY Vol. 4 became the first official topic of my new “Thoughts” video series.
I also went out in search of other opinions by reading and watching other people’s videos and posts once more. This is to see what people are talking about and what it is they are saying. I don’t really trust myself, so by going to see what other’s are saying helped me feel more confident about what I would end up writing. That’s not because I was looking for validation in the things I was going to say. It was so I could find new things to bring up that others weren’t, and find things I could either add onto or explain why I don’t agree in an indirect way. This is why I added the “Other reviewers I watched” at the bottom of the description for my videos. These were people I looked into and felt that they made good points and good videos that I either agreed or disagreed with. I don’t think I’m going to be including that going forward. (I’m still going to watch and get informed. I’m just not going to say who I watched anymore)
I then went to write my video with the intent to have it look like I hadn’t seen or read any outside material about RWBY. No commentary, interviews, tweets, etc. Write it so I had just finished watching the Volume and am giving my critique and analysis as though it is based just on that.
The rest of my initial approach to this was, also, SO NAÏVE. I planned to talk about the Volume and all its parts in ONE VIDEO. Oh, how foolish I was. I seriously thought I could do this in 30 to 40 minutes (The Story video ended up being 40 minutes long). Wrote almost the entire script of the video before I actually timed how long it could take (Story, Animation, Design, and parts of Final Thoughts). I then realized my mistake when the Story section, in testing, was around 30 minutes.
With that, I realized that I ABSOLUTELY had to split this video into parts. I also went straight into recording my Story video (https://youtu.be/GHQpfMdGAE0). And dumb me also had to include a live recorded portion of me talking for another 5 minutes after I had finished recording and was in the middle of editing it. Making the video EVEN longer than before!
The lesson I learned after making that video is to CUT. This doesn’t just apply to making a shorter video. This also applies to making a more concise and stronger video. In order to make good, strong arguments, you got to cut the fat. Not only that, but you also have to rework your ideas/points if you really want to keep and present them. This new approach is what I applied to the next video, which would go on to become the most viewed and well liked video that I have put out to this day. If I hadn’t learned that lesson, my “Animation & Editing” video for RWBY Vol. 4 would’ve become the most hated thing I ever put out. I’m not exaggerating. You think my approach to these videos overall was bad at first? Keep reading.
For my Animation video, I planned to make it in the style of Digibro’s “Your Anime Sucks”. I wrote it like I was live-tweeting about it. WHAT A FUCKING STUPID IDEA!!
Here are my problems:
1. I’m not funny (shocker).
2. I don’t have the respect and clout to make this and not get destroyed for it.
3. It was such a change in tone compared to how I did the Story video.
4. I DON’T KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT.
I still have the original script that I wrote for that video. Here are some excerpts from that:
“Thank you, Captain Obvious.”
“More like activate the heavy cannon because it doesn’t need anyone operating or loading it.”
“You seriously need to follow the biggest thing you’ve ever seen with a telescope?”
“Jaune stating something really stupid, because it doesn’t matter if you’re not when he is. At least Ren asks a decent question.”
“I’m shocked that this projectile we can see didn’t curve around Tyrian in order to hit Nora.”
“You guys had to throw in pointless movement, didn’t you?”
“That was easy. How are they going to help Qrow and make it to Mistral now?
Oh, what the fuck?!”
Not really well thought out and put together now are they? Not even on topic!
So, I had every action scene of Volume 4 written out like this. It was already clear I had to cut and rework EVERY. SINGLE. THING. What I ended up doing is take the points I felt strongly about and re-adjust them into a new script, which became the “Animation & Editing” video I put out (https://youtu.be/Dxvu8QaV60g). That video now sits at 2,913 views and 106 likes. Just imagine the reception it would’ve got if I hadn’t changed my approach and stuck with my original plan.
The lesson I learned from making that is to keep cutting and don’t write based off of one’s own memory. I still cut things from the video, even after recording and editing it. I learned that I don’t have to talk about everything. I just need to focus on what I know and what I feel the strongest about. I also had to completely rewrite one section of the video and get a new example. That was the part of the video where I talked about the Line of Action. The original example was Blake and Sun clipping the wings of the Sea Dragon Grimm. What I originally wrote was incorrect for how the scene actually went and was shot, and it ended up as a poor example for what I was talking about.
With this new mindset, I continued to rewrite my script and make my last two videos, “The New Look” and “Final Thoughts”. (The New Look: https://youtu.be/PVNObGIzCSI) The new look video went great, but my Final Thoughts video got really long, so I had to cut that into two more parts, “Miscellaneous” and “Final Thoughts”. (Miscellaneous: https://youtu.be/8do0dT86IWY ) Miscellaneous still went ok, but I made two more mistakes with the Final Thoughts video.
In the Final Thoughts video (https://youtu.be/78UeP6BkRxI), I decided to include some of the stuff I cut from the original Animation and Editing video, among others. I also came to realize that I didn’t actually accomplish my goal of writing the scripts for these videos as though I hadn’t seen or read any outside sources or drama. I responded to one of the people who commented, who felt I was being unfair in my judgment, by admitting that Shane Newville’s Open Letter may have had an influence on me. That was an immediate sign of failure and regret on my part. Going forward, I had to do better.
And do better I did.
I continued on by talking about the RWBY Character Shorts, which I split into two parts. One for the Ruby, Weiss, and Yang Shorts (https://youtu.be/rXjujR6p8Rs), and another for the Blake Short (https://youtu.be/x9TvfssSmxI). The Blake short was the big one because it was the most negative video I had created up to that point. The reason for this is due to the fact that I just didn’t like the Blake Character Short.
After that came RWBY Volume 5. I absolutely had to do better this time; especially, because I was going to say Volume 5 is worse than Volume 4. I had to be sure to write and show how Volume 4 did things better than Volume 5. I did this by showing and detailing specific scenes, stories, and moments of action.
Thoughts - RWBY Vol. 5
Story: https://youtu.be/KTptl7o9hVw
Animation & Editing: https://youtu.be/ndjxOBrBvQU
Design: https://youtu.be/FdSTf2iHHXU
Final Thoughts: https://youtu.be/09Rp88xEovo
I think my Volume 5 videos are the best of the series so far. I continued to apply the lessons I learned. I even added little skits to the videos. I did have a really hard time writing the Final Thoughts video for Volume 5. The big one I spent the most time on was the issues with the last 4 episodes of the Volume. Almost every point I wrote had a caveat.
“So, it’s like this”, I would write.
“Wait, this here goes against that and thus makes my argument weak”, I would think soon after.
It wasn’t going well for me due to also having to deal with school at the same time. I got really behind because of things like that. I ended up settling on just getting the basic fundamentals of the episodes and what I wanted to be sure I brought up as a way of talking about the episodes’ issues in general. I think it turned out fine, but I ended up skipping on the stuff with Blake and the White Fang as a result. I really wish I could’ve included talking about the action and editing for two of those scenes.
With that, I have detailed the journey I have taken in making Critical RWBY content. The thing I think matters the most when creating critical content is to make sure that where you are coming from and what you value is made clear or evident by your criticisms and analysis. This gives your audience a basis to judge whether your arguments and point of view are sound and understandable. I did this with my “Design” video for Volume 5 by making it clear right from the get go that I don’t have a lot of knowledge on the subjects I talk about for the video and that what I say is based on that limited knowledge and understanding.
I think that is why I don’t get much or any negative feedback about my videos. I have had people say my videos are a breath of fresh air compared to other “critics” (Their words not mine). Another was just astounded at how little attention I get. Wondering why my video they watched doesn’t get more views. Not a big deal. I’m recent, small, and don’t upload frequently.
The thing with my “Thoughts” videos is that I don’t want to be definitive. I want to be a jumping off point. A place where there can be further discussion, even off my platform. I was worried at first cause I didn’t know how well my videos would be received and how I would handle any form of negative feedback, both minor and major. I think I have handled things well, but that’s probably cause of how little attention I have gotten so far. Either way, I remain motivated to keep making more videos.
Going forward, I want to talk about more than just RWBY. I still have a lot to say in regards to the series. I just have other things I am passionate about that I want to express my thoughts on. I have already made a video on Avengers Infinity War to get started.
Before I end this, I want to list out my main influences when making these videos.
Mother’s Basement (The one I try to emulate the most)
Kaptainkristian (editing and presentation)
Every Frame a Painting (editing, writing and much more. Seriously, read this: https://medium.com/@tonyszhou/postmortem-1b338537fabc)
Chris Stuckmann (how to construct criticism)
Jeremy Jahns (how to focus and be concise)
Mauler (The amount of detail this guy gets into for what he talks about is insane)
The Cartoon Cipher (What they do with music and their editing fascinates and amazes me)
Movies with Mikey (Fun and amazingly presented)
Each of these teaches me how to construct my videos, and what to look for when I analyze and critique media. This is also why I seek out other opinions by other reviewers and people who discuss what I plan on talking about. It’s all about getting that extra perspective that can help build, expand and construct my own.
As I continue to make these videos, I will continue to learn and grow.
In this video, I talk about the Animation of the non-action and action scenes, as well as some of the Editing for RWBY Volume 5. I finish off by talking abou...
Finally got the video discussing the Animation and Editing of RWBY Volume 5 up for anyone to watch. I talk about the Animation of the non-action and action scenes, reference some of the 12 Principles of Animation, talk about and breakdown my favorite action sequence, and finally point out some of the inconsistencies of the presentation for the action scenes.
