#final animatic

[jollyfoxanimations2]

This is my finalized animatic for my 30 second poem adaptation, as you can see there has many changes to this animatic than the previous one. i changed the size of the wall and gate the start because i wanted there to be more of an enclosed environment and better scaling for the character. 

[avt390-001videoartsc]

Here is my FINAL ANIMATION FOR 390!!! I SUCK at music and sound... but at least the animatic is good. I got busy this weekend because of another project but hopefully this will be pretty good

[artbykarly]

Going Live - 6

Again, just a disclaimer that the drawings were done by another group member, Rachel! With the cuts made and everyone agreeing on them we decided to start talking about filming and locations. Many of the first suggestions were shot down because of the season we were in. The end of winter was a hard time to film about nature. There weren’t many trees that had leaves on them making anything we shot look dead or less alive than we wanted. 

[giulia-m-assignment]

Final Animatic

[studiosunbeam]

[ekniemisba3a]

BA3a Personal Showcase - Final animation & animatic (with sound)

The sound is ok, not great at sound design, can never seem to get exactly what I want, did have trouble making my voice sound more masculine, would have been better to get in a male voice actor, preferably someone older and gruffer, particularly for the scream - my own didn’t work well so used sample from ZapSplat (free sound clips) - most of my sound effects are from this site, plus my own recordings. Would love to edit this more before submission if I get the time but most likely need to focus on Research Report. Would be great to use feedback from Jon and try music underneath, possibly at ending? I love dramatic music so would be great to experiment with that.

Tutor Jon’s feedback:

Posing in end change up? head movement? Scream should come earlier

Play the maker/Robert morgan underneath tone of music?

Violins at beginning? dramatic! Add music? more white noise?

[ekniemisba3a]

BA3a Personal Showcase - Final animation & animatic (without sound)

Much clearer, glad I made time to add colour, makes narrative easier to understand eg. ripping out fur from his face. Didn’t get to include everything I wanted including slow zoom into the photo as Simon leaves the living room, didn’t get time to draw everything in the shot eg. repetitions of three. Lots of improvements to make if had more time in both the animation and before the deadline eg. inbetweens of rat from seeing diseased tail to biting it, add shadows, paint backgrounds, play around with placement of title, add growths/disease to areas of house. Overall, I am happier with the animatic, I think I am able to convey my narrative, even though my moral is something you have to look for rather than immediately spoon fed to the audience, I prefer it this way. I think I have told a good story that has a pace, starting slow then building into the horror of the climax then the calm/shock for the aftermath. Makes people feel disturbed and sorry for Simon - referring back to a cautionary tale, I think I achieved that even though there is much more I could do with this narrative.

[gemmaschnablemdxanimation]

This is the final animatic for the lip sync photoshop workshop showing how our final film will basically look like.