#first lines

[carnivorousflamingo]

Revolution tastes oddly... sweet.

- Iron Flame, Rebecca Yarros

[carnivorousflamingo]

He isn't a knight.

- The Wolf and His King, Finn Longman

[c-k-mack]

As musical theatre people, we should have recognized what the 6,7 trend was part of, but 8 and the apocalyptic chaos it wrought still caught us unprepared.

[woundedsoul12]

Latest fics, first line edition!

Rules: Post the first sentence of your latest 10 fanfics, then tag 10 people. I was tagged by @mercurymk and @echo-recall!! Thanks for the tags ❤️❤️ Both are amazing writers go peek their stuff

Gentle tags for @sorcerousadventurer @jenn2d2 @serialsforbellara @kogarashi-art @necromanticsoul @genjyoandgojyoandhakkai @ladyofcrowsandcoffee @lemondelighted @amoaliquis @redaresss

1. Kill Your Darlings Ch 1 - My Rook Week Piece where I just kill Riley over and over

Fennec skidded to a stop in front of Rook, doubled over as she tried to pant out the words stuck between her ribs.

2. Static - Soap x Reader

Something is wrong.

3. No Me Without You - My Lucanis week letter

Amor, I once found coffee a solace, a cure for keeping Spite away.

4. The Last of the Real Ones - My 10k Big Bang Rook x Rook AU extravagant

Riley reclined his massive form across the busted couch in his small Minrathous apartment.

5. The Adventures of Coccyx Ingellvar - Rook x Davrin

"So…your real name is Coc?"

6. Microfic May - another Rook x Rook but each is exactly 50 words

Sun was hot, fish weren't biting, and sweat beaded down Ronnie's brow.

7. Compromised - Ghoap

Fuck, he was compromised.

8. Another Day, Another Dollar - Nurses Week with Tarquin/Rook

Another day, another dollar. Or something like that as Lena ran a frustrated hand through her short hair as yet another call light dinged.

9. Pick-Me-Up - Shane/Farmer

"Farm girl…" Shane greeted in a voice cold as the beer in his hand.

10. 9:17 Minrathous Red - Rook and His Father talk

No matter how Riley had grown over the years, Charon Mercar always seemed a mountain of a man to him.

[sophinspace]

last ten fanfics

Thanks for the tag, @ussjellyfish!

In reverse order from most recent:

1. the road is long (alone is longer) - Caleb Mir/Darem Reymi, teen, Darem is pushing himself again and Caelb needs to talk him down.

“You talk to him.”

2. the violence of existing (for only you) - Nahla Ake/Anisha Mir, mature, Anisha punishes Nahla with unsafe kink only it's less of a punishment than she currently realises, wip.

No one disarms Anisha Mir. Especially not high and mighty Starfleet officers who think they're too good to bother with the likes of her, and just send holograms.

3. (In the Mirror) I Don’t Recognize Her - SAM & Sylvia Tilly (and the cadets), teen, Sam's friends are trying to tell her they love her exactly the way she is, but she might need an outside opinion.

Series Acclimation Mil. At your request, we are responding to your most recent report via Nahla Ake. 

4. Worth the Work - Caleb Mir & Jett Reno, teen, Caleb doesn't think he's worth anyone's trouble; Reno gives him an object lesson.

Cadet Mir has made good progress over the past year.

5. Touch the Sun - Tarima Sadal & Zeeren Kelrec, teen, Tarima and her former chancellor get stuck in a turbolift. Empathic shenanigans and panic attacks ensure.

I am sorry to inform you that I am revoking your certificate of fitness to serve at the War College. 

6. All I Gave You Was Goodbye - Caleb Mir/Darem Reymi, teen, there are three stories Caleb has never shared with anyone, but it's time he told Darem.

Caleb can’t take the furtive glances or the awkward quiet anymore. 

7. What Needs to be Done - Darem Reymi & Jett Reno, teen, Darem has a meltdown; Reno helps;

Darem Reymi is emotionally unstable. 

8. all the things I never said before - Caleb Mir/Darem Reymi, teen, Darem and Caleb are the only ones who don't know they're dating.

“Anywhere but the storage closet.”

9. (why don’t we go) somewhere only we know - Caleb Mir/Darem Reymi, teen, these two idiots need to learn to open up a bit.

To Darem Reymi, getting a B+ is the end of the world, apparently. 

10. Forgetting We’re Dead Stars Too, Nahla Ake, mostly just her but a few faculty appearances and a bit of Nahla & Caleb, teen, Nahla can't forget the people she's sent to their deaths (including her son).

Whatever you tell yourself when you can’t sleep, in an endless, endless night. He wasn’t wrong.

Any patterns in my first lines were a bit messed up because of my neurodivergent cadets series, where each one starts with a letter. But otherwise I have a tendency to start with a wry bit of dialogue or observation from a character. Good balance of gen and a couple of rarepairs, one of which I will obsessively write till I fall over - so I have the role I expected in this fandom.

No-obligation tagging: @larissafae @coldflasher @xo-reymi @purpleyin @habibialkaysani

[starlightdreamerstar]

Last 10 fan fics: a writer meme

rules: post the first sentence of your most recent 10 fan fics and tag up to 10 people.

Thank you for the tag @watsonsstressball !

In order of newest to oldest:

1) Crowley stood on the deck of The Fang as he watched his crew carrying aboard the cargo they’d seized from the Royal Navy frigate The Vengeance. (From “I Will Always Come For You”)

2) The brig was cold, the kind of cold that seeped into your bones. (From “A Matter Of Conscience”)

3) The way the antique silver snuffbox caught the light drew Aziraphale’s eye more strongly than any he’d ever seen. (From “Irresistible”)

4) Crowley had sat in the corner of their sofa so his angel could feel fully shielded, the tartan upholstered arm pressing his husband’s back as he sat in Crowley’s lap, his arms wrapped tightly and protectively around his love. (From “You Put Your Arms Around Me”)

5) Crowley looked askance at the mug of herbal tea but one glare from Anathema had him sighing and wrapping his hands around it, the heat felt comforting as it seeped into his palms. (From “A Faithful Friend Is A Sturdy Shelter”)

6) Aziraphale’s heat was almost upon him, Crowley could tell because his mate had been bratting all day long. (From “If You Mess With The Bull”)

7) Aziraphale sat on the sofa, his mate’s usual scents of cinnamon, leather and coffee were charred, telling him that Crowley was in a profoundly angry mood. (From “When The Past Comes Back To Haunt You”)

8) It’d been another successful night and Crowley was enjoying a well deserved coffee on the balcony of his flat. (From “You're Only Still Alive Because I Made A Promise”)

9) For miles in every direction there was nothing left but charred tree stumps and gray ash that gently blew on the hot breeze. (From “Reap The Whirlwind”)

10) It was a lovely day in late spring, the sun was shining, pups were running around the park and ducks swam closer, hoping to get fed. (From “Won’t Let Nobody Hurt You”)

My AO3 https://archiveofourown.org/users/Starlightdreamerstar/works

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Tagging just for fun and no pressure! @tehrenb @wick-de-la-vela @fenrislorsrai @sylwritesstuff @theladydrgn @the-villainous-ace @ganymedian @ashfae @amuseoffyre @persianpenname

[alyssalenko]

First Lines

Rules: post the beginning lines of your most recent 10 published fanfics, then attempt to tag 10 people!

Thanks to @pikapeppa @hazelestelle for the tag. It's been forever and a day it feels like since I did one of these. I was also waiting until I had 10 new ones to share...and I also skipped kinktober as it is a bunch of oneshots rolled into one and not done yet. (otherwise it would be all broken up already and I could have done this ages ago XD) 🥰

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1. Spark of Connection (Mass Effect, Thane Krios/Femshep, rated E)

“Siha, I—I have known I will die for many years."

2. A Dwarf and his Crossbow (Dragon Age, Varric Tethras/Bianca the Crossbow, rated E)

Varric hummed Bianca’s Song to himself as he puttered around his room, collecting a small length of cord, several bolts, four jars of varying size and a few tools, which to the untrained eye was just a bunch of junk, but to those closest to him, it was Bianca’s maintenance day.

3. Beyond the Veil (Dragon Age, Solas/F!Lavellan, rated M)

“Oh, Vhenan.”

4. Demon of the Night Winds (Mass Effect, James Vega/Morinth, rated E)

James smiled as he entered Afterlife's VIP area, the thumping of the bass pulsing through his body and the dancing asari up on the platforms filling his vision.

5. Early Mornings (Mass Effect, James Vega/Joker/Femshep, rated E)

Ava blinked awake, a little disoriented to be in their room–only vaguely remembering James carrying her to bed in the middle of the night after they'd all fallen asleep on the sofa watching Blasto–and smiled sleepily at the warmth surrounding her.

6. A Walk on the Wild Side (Mass Effect, Kaidan Alenko/Donovan Hock/Femshep, rated E)

Kaidan held the door to the club open for her before rejoining her at her side, his palm resting in the small of her back, excited tingles spreading out from the point of contact as he guided her through the club and to a secluded stage with a tantric chair in the center of it.

7. Lessons of the Flesh (Mass Effect, Joker/EDI, rated E)

Joker glanced at the console in front of him, 2137 glaring up at him from the screen—he’d been here for an hour already and he wasn’t a patient man, restlessness starting to kick in as he sat there.

8. Pathfinder Ryder and the terrible, horrible, no good, very bad nickname (Mass Effect: Andromeda, Bain Massani/Sis!Ryder, rated E)

Ryder sighed as she picked off the last Kett attacker that had ambushed them and slumped against the wall behind her, biotic glow fading from around her and her eyes returning to their normal color.

9. The Ties that Bind (Dragon Age, Felassan/M!Lavellan, rated G)

Felassan found himself watching Elessar across the war table; the Inquisitor really was quite remarkable, and if he hadn’t known Solas like he did, he would have said that if anyone could find the dread wolf it would be this man in front of him.

10. Be Mean (Dragon Age, Illario Dellamorte/F!Rook, rated E)

Illario glanced up as footsteps sounded beyond the door, his body on high alert from having been sitting here for Maker knew how long and restlessness had started to set in.

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Tagging: @vorchagirl @wickedwitchofthewilds @sinsbymanka @charlatron @amarmeme @starsandskies @randomlygeneratedstring @ooachilliaoo @kittynomsdeplume @commander-krios

[stringtheory13]

Do you all count the prologue for the first line of a book?

I just started reading Pillars of the Earth by Ken Follett, and the first line of the Prologue is “The small boys came early to the hanging” and the first line of chapter 1 is “In a broad valley, at the foot of a sloping hillside, beside a clear bubbling stream, Tom was building a house.”

And those sentences just set VERY different vibes for the book.