[rib]cage Feedback Reflection
We had a great class discussion after I performed my flash study. The class was taken by the interesting shapes I was making. I was pleased with this feedback because this is something I was really focused on while I was creating. I was intentionally working to create new shapes. We also discussed the interesting quality of the movement throughout the whole piece. MiKayla mentioned that because the movement was so interesting when I did a double pirouette she was instantly "pulled out of it." I really appreciated this comment and I can understand why she felt that way. Going forward if I were to continue I would revisit this moment and perhaps something as simple as changing the position of the foot and arms while turning would fix that issue. Lastly, we had a discussion about the very last moment in the piece when I slowly "picked up a feather" and then heavily dropped it. Brittany mentioned that this action suddenly gave me a very humanistic quality that wasn't present through the rest of the piece. Haley mentioned that she was craving this moment of suspense where I would not drop my hand. Again going forward I would definitely take her advice on that moment.












