(from @flowerprose)
Happy STS!
From your WIP - can you share a line or passage that you’ve been musing about lately? Why is it so significant to you?
What writing advice do you implement often? What writing advice have you not found particularly useful for you and your craft?
thanks for the ask @flowerprose! sorry it took me an age and a half lol
the passage that I'm gonna talk about it something that I was thinking about today. It actually has to do with Solera and her family and their whole backstory, the explanation of which spans several chapters (both books, low-key, tho there isn't much of it shown in book one) now, I can't talk too much about it, because it is pretty spoiler-y, but I will share this little bit (some stuff redacted for spoilers and to shorten it)
"I know I should have gone after her. Fought for her so that he wouldn't take her. But how many more of us would have been lost? He still would have won, and what would have been the reason?"
My stirring slowed, and I gulped, the words that I know I shouldn't say perched on the tip of my tongue. "Geros was right about you." Her head snapped up, her eyes boring into mine. "You are frightened of him."
Rage was simmering behind her eyes, in the tense way she was holding herself as she gripped the table she sat behind. But I hadn't said my piece quite yet.
"I understand why. He's a terrible man who's done...unspeakable things for years. [...] I'm scared, too, of what he's capable of. But, [...] we know what it is he does. We know his reign won't end when he's dead. Isotrei will live on, unless it's defeated, and isn't that what [redacted] is all about? Putting an end to all of this?"
I feel like it's self-explanatory, but this part is at the heart of the call to action for the character she's speaking to and it's why Thala has gone to her in the first place. Because she knows that she needs her help to get the revenge and closure that she needs.
as for writing advice: my personal favorite (which I've been struggling with implementing personally lately but the past two days have been good) is Terry Pratchett's (I think) advice to keep your daily word count goal low and manageable so that it's easy to achieve and 1) if it's a good writing day, odds are you'll keep going after you hit it but 2) if it's a bad writing day, once you hit it, you've reached your goal and you can stop. My personal word count goal is 200 per day because I work full time at a job and in an industry I'm long since burnt out in (lol) and am usually exhausted by the time I get home.
and for writing advice that I don't use, I can't really remember any at the moment? I'm sure there's some tho lol