INSPECTION PRACTICE - Yan! Lohen x Fem! Reader
The Vice Captain of the Knights of Favonius' Fifth Company seemed to have posted a commission on the Adventurer's Guild board, needing help with inspection practice, out of boredom (and possibly goodwill) you accepted the commission without knowing what exactly you'll be getting into...
content warning: 18+ MINORS DNI, yandere! lohen x fem! reader, suggestive themes, mentions and use of weapons (knives and guns), being held at a gunpoint for a short time, stalking from afar (scopophilia), obsession, slight body worship.
wc: 2k
notes: i'm not entirely familiar with weapons and guns so pardon if there are inaccuracies!
Lohen holds you at a gunpoint, circling you with the hole of the pistol firmly pressed against your forehead.
“Hmm…” He hums playfully. “Weapon check!~” He whispers, biting your earlobe playfully.
“Hands up.” Lohen sternly orders, his eyes narrowed down to you, the pistol on your head pulled away, but his finger remained on the trigger.
The demand on his voice barely laced by kindness was quite a surprise, after taking his commission posted on the adventurer's guild, you wonder why nobody ever took it. The post was two weeks old after all.
[Inspection Practice by Vice Captain Lohen of the Knights of Favonius’ Fifth Company, Reward: 100,000 Mora]
With much time in your hands, you decided to humor such a simple commission.
Which leaves you in your predicament. The other Knights of Favonius members gave you weapons to hide all over your body, it didn’t matter if it was on your clothes or at the hem of your pants, and apparently, Lohen will practice inspection with those weapons hidden all over you.
The knights only promise you a “He knows it’s practice, so don’t be too alarmed yeah?” Then off they sent you to the headquarter’s basement, with a small lightbulb being your only source of light.Yeah, like that would make everything less eerie.
After he demanded you to lift your hands, Lohen’s touch snaked up your neck, the leather of his gloves directly touching your skin causing a small tingle of friction between you two. “Neck, huh?” He sultrily breathes on the shell of your ear. “A tiny place, weapons are sooooo easy to spot here.”
Lohen pulled away, a cheeky grin plastered all over his face. “Unfortunately, you’re not pretty sneaky with this, hm?” He dangles a tiny blade necklace in front of your face. You expected it anyway, the silver of the beads of that weapon did twinkle obviously inside such a dark basement.
“Arms.” He didn’t waste time as his hands moved to your shoulders, slowly feeling it with his hands, then sliding smoothly to your bare shoulders in the blink of an eye. “Hmm hmm..” He moves behind you, tickling your nape with his breath.
“Your arms are bare, huh?” Lohen whispers, his fingers moving to the underside of your arms, feeling it back and forth. “No weapons here.” He scoffs playfully, his hands leaving both of your shoulders. “But your fingers said otherwise.”
You didn’t even notice the sudden weight on your hands, Lohen swiftly snatches the iron knuckle on your left hand and swings his index on one of the holes, playing with the weapon in front of you. “I told the other knights to challenge me. Where’s the fun in this?” He playfully coos, leaning close to your face; his eyes barely bear any light yet his pupils seem to enlarge at the sight of your anxious gaze.
“You’re pretty cute.” Lohen grins, immediately moving back to scan you from head to toe.
“Let’s move on to your torso, shall we?” He adjusted his leather gloves and stepped close. “Ah, you don’t mind if I feel you here, right?”Lohen’s hands gently held close to your upper torso, his thumbs slowly rubbing on your sides. He leans close to your ear once more and whispers “It’s part of the inspection after all.”
His tone was convincing enough, it is inspection after all. Strangely, your initial anxiety seemed to be melted away by whatever that fluttery feeling pooling in your coil.
“Excited?” Lohen calls you out.
Ah that’s right, with his hands finished on feeling your sides and back, Lohen smoothly crept his hands to your lower abdomen. “Hmm… Something is bulgy here…” He snickers, “And it seems to be inside.”
He lowers his fingers, holding to the hem of your shirt. “May I?”
You didn’t hesitate a nod, it’s inspection… How else will he retrieve the weapon, after all?
“Good.” Lohen lets out a subtle growl “Don’t mind if I do.” His hands going under your shirt.
Lohen’s gaze intently locked on to yours. Fingers wrapped in leather gloves touched your bare abdomen, pressing quite firmly on different places until finally. “Bingo.”
He quickly takes out a thin dagger. “Who would’ve thought!” Lohen laughs, throwing the retrieved dagger in the air several times. “Nice hiding place. I must say, I’m surprised.”
“Sneaky, but not sneaky enough.” He smirks, his hands now held behind you, fumbling with the waist band of your pants and taking out an appendix knife. “This one’s quite mediocre though…” He huffed teasingly, face laced with mock disappointment.
“Did the knights tell you to hide it behind you?” He snorts. “Relay a message to them from me after this, ‘kay?” He gave you a cheeky grin. “Tell them that I said to practice hiding weapons better.”
He gently pats your behind with a tiny manic giggle. “Now… you have one weapon left, I suppose?”
Lohen stands up straight and circles you just like before, looking all over you. A few seconds passed as you heard the small screech of wood being dragged. Turning back, the wooden chair greets your eye.
“I have a suspicion on where that last item may be…” He hums
“Sit.”
Without another word, you sat at the chair obediently, all traces of fear and nervousness now gone, replaced by lingering excitement on what Lohen may have in store.
“You’re cute AND obedient.” Lohen chuckles softly, settling in front of you, his gaze down at you.
He flashes another smile, unexpectedly, he slowly pulls his leather gloves off. His slender fingers are on display. “I gotta be veeeery thorough with this one.”
To add to the excitement coiling on you, Lohen knelt down and moved closer to you, holding both of your legs as he palms your pants.
“Oh my… There seems to be a lump down here.” Lohen snakes his bare hands to your inner thighs. “And how should I remove this, hm?”
You emit a shaky gulp, your body shaking slightly. Not from fear, but excitement. Excitement of what he could possibly do…
“To retrieve something, there needs to be a clear view.” Lohen leaned his head to your thighs, resting his chin in between them and looking up at you. “Your face screams yes…”“It can’t be helped…” He sighs teasingly, his cold hands finding its way back to the waistband of your pants, eyes not breaking contact with yours; not even for a second.
Slowly… Gently… He pulls your pants down, his cold fingers brushing against your bare thighs. To add to the sensation, Lohen blows softly on your thighs with every skin getting more and more exposed.
The embarrassment rules over your face, cheeks flushed red, your breath hitched with every teasing gesture he shows. This guy is absolutely manic, and he seems to enjoy riling you up with even the slightest touch.
“Sensitive?” Lohen cheekily asks, your pants all the way down now. The sight made him absolutely delighted.
“Found it.”
You squeaked in surprise as Lohen spread your legs apart, followed by a satisfied whistle. “So this is where you hid the last one, hm?”
Looking close at him despite the heat you’re feeling all over your body, his pupils seem to look much more dilated than earlier, his gaze at your thighs intensely satisfied and elated.
Carefully, he grabbed the pistol strapped on to your left inner thigh. “Found the last one.” Lohen smirks, his thumbs tenderly rubbing your thighs with a satisfactory hum.
“Good work.” To end things off, he licks a long stripe on your right thigh,, his hand firmly placed on your knees, just in case you might close them and squeeze his head shut… But judging from the way he seems to be enjoying himself, he wouldn’t mind suffocating between your thighs.
His saliva glistened on your thigh as he pulled away, contented at the sight of your flustered face, disheveled and turned on.
“I like the face you’re making right now.” He gets up, carefully pulling your pants back up and buttoning them in place.
“Good job, you may leave.”
After everything that unravelled, the redness in your face seemed to die down. Fortunately, Lohen seemed to soften a bit, calming you down and helping you get up the stairs. “Careful now…”He smiles kindly while sending you off. “No worries, cutie. I’ll mark the commission as a success. Come back tomorrow to get your reward mora!” He happily waves as you disappear from his sight.
“Finally.” Lohen groans, knelt on the floor while his hand palms the wooden chair you were sitting on just a few minutes ago.
“She took the commission.” He sighs dreamily.
Four whole months of constantly posting the same commission, just so that you can finally accept it.
The first commission posted only took one day for someone to accept; an inspection practice as per instructed. Lohen resorted to violent and cruel tactics to scare the first adventurer who accepted his commission, making a small cut on the cheek, and overall creeping the adventurer out. Eventually after practice, the adventurer took his mora and sprinted off in fear..
Like a domino effect, the second commission was posted, the same practice, the same reward, but this one took three days before an adventurer took it, this one more insane than before, pulling the trigger of an empty pistol, prank stabbing on the neck, the adventurer didn’t even finish the practice, running off while crying.
The next commissions were posted, the intervals of acceptance growing longer and longer, the message of the Vice Captain of the Knights of Favonius' Fifth Company resulting in violent tactics and threats during practice quietly spread amongst the adventurers who took it.
It was until the eight time he posted the commission, that the knights informed him that it was you who took it.
Finally… Finally…
Months of waiting for you almost made him insane, when he can only watch you from afar, conversing with other adventurers. Watching your every step, how adorable you look when you eat. And how oblivious you look when he sneaks through your windows at night when you’re fast asleep.
That could’ve been me. He would grit behind in envy.
Lohen can be quite the tactician, playing the long game just to finally snag you from those rowdy adventurers.
The trap he laid down patiently finally bearing fruit when he saw you descend to the basement…
Oh Lohen barely contained himself, your face, your body, your reactions. But he masked it, under strange fascination when deep inside, he wanted nothing more than to worship your body, take your clothes off and kiss you everywhere. Oh the thought was enough to make him drool…
But in the end, Lohen couldn’t exactly contain himself, he kept on reminding himself that he’ll only tease and make you embarrassed.
But the face you gave him earlier, a face of bashful arousal. Lohen forgot his initial reminder, and without a thought spread your legs apart. Now that he’s reflecting on it, the action was pretty obscene, but your face…
He can still remember how you gasped and squeaked at his bold move, taking the hidden pistol while his fingers touched your inner thighs, oh Lohen thought he was in heaven…
The lick afterwards was something he planned though, teasing you enough to squirm and maybe crush his head between your thighs but unfortunately didn’t happen.
Lohen can still feel the sensation of your skin on his tongue, oh how he adored how smooth and milky delicious your thighs were to his tastebuds. And maybe… Just maybe if he had moved closer, he could’ve licked you deeper.
Still, decency ruled over him, he’ll play the long game, willing to mask off the ravenous hunger he’s had for you. As much as he wants to claw his way to you, kiss you relentlessly and worship your whole being. Your aroused face says it all.
It won’t be long until you start seeking and obsessing him too, and when that day comes, he’ll devour and worship you immensely.
notes: happy lohen release day! the demo trailer awakened something in me and thus i made this short fic, i was initially planning something more freaky but this will do, i wanted it to be more freaky than just downright violent after all.
may your lohen pulls be blessed!










