response to some frankenstein takes!!
though i am making the response to this post specifically, i have also seen these takes a few times before and so this is also in response to those!
first off i want to say that i'm so excited that other people are getting excited about the book and i'm really glad for the critical analysis! these are just my personal opinions in response to other personal opinions but i'm not upset with people.
all quotes are pulled from the above linked post or from the Project Gutenberg Frankenstein.
on Victor's motivations:
This immense grief that he is caught up in causes him to spiral into a psychosis of an obsession with death and specifically how to reverse it... I definitely think the reason Victor created his Creation in the first place was because of his Mother. (post)
obviously i can't/don't disagree with the fact that Victor's mother's death influenced him heavily, but i think that people often underplay the importance of the fight for knowledge.
I entered with the greatest diligence into the search of the philosopher’s stone and the elixir of life; but the latter soon obtained my undivided attention. Wealth was an inferior object, but what glory would attend the discovery if I could banish disease from the human frame and render man invulnerable to any but a violent death! (Gutenberg)
this quote comes from chapter two, when Victor first becomes obsessed with death and its reversal. his mother dies in chapter three. her death actually interrupts and stops his dedication to alchemy, and he no longer wants to leave his family to go to school. with the grief and depression settled on him, he spends the rest of chapter three slogging his way through school, until he meets Waldman, who gives him the resources to start learning science. his words when he again becomes passionate about science are:
I will pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of creation. (Gutenberg)
rather than words about life and death, he speaks of creation, power, and pioneering. i think Mary Shelley's word choice is crucial here. although he later talks again about his obsession with life and death, the initiatives that drive his study don't start with his mother, they start with his need for innovation and discovery.
on the Creation's mind:
Now here's where I get kind of controversial with this opinion. When he created this creation, The Creation was a newborn. (post)
i'm afraid i must starkly disagree with this one. the Creation's brain is fully developed, though he has no memories or knowledge. this is an extremely important distinction from newborns and children, as their actions are heavily dictated by underdeveloped neurological capabilities. this deprives them of complex reasoning, risk/reward evaluation, and long-term consideration.
if an adult suffered from a stroke that resulted in retrograde amnesia, apraxia, agnosia, and aphasia, you would not think of them as an infant. similarly, those with alzheimer's are not considered to be children. although it is often acknowledged that these symptoms can make someone feel as burdensome as a child, it is noteworthy that everyone involved understands the difference; these people are adults with serious conditions that require attention and care.
we know the Creation does not have a child's brain because he is able to quickly learn and eloquently use language, and because he is able to understand long-term cause and effect (ex: understanding that placing the locket will result in the placement of blame, understanding that killing one person will hurt another).
on the relation of the Creation to Victor:
people always like to say that “they have a Father's son relationship” when in reality, yes the creation viewed Victor as a father, but Victor has always viewed this creation as an object until the last couple chapters of the entire book (post)
i agree that they do not have a father-son relationship! i have two nit-picky addendums to make:
1.) the theme of fatherhood is still core to their relationship, even if it isn't a father-son relationship
No father could claim the gratitude of his child so completely as I should deserve theirs. (Victor, referencing the hypothetical species he will create - Gutenberg)
he explains before this sentence how the species should praise him as a god, and this quote isn't saying that he thinks he is the 'father' of the species, but it is still roping in the concept of fatherhood where it was otherwise unthought of. several times in the remaining duration of the chapter, he battles with the knowledge that he is neglecting communication with his father. once the Creation is finished, he doesn't think of his father again until clerval reminds him.
i have vague concepts of theming here, but i have a hard time connecting everything coherently (my frankenmoots are much better at frankenstien theory). for now, i'll just say that he thinks about his dad a lot while making the Creation, and once the creation is gone, he does not think about his father so much : )
2.) Creation does not view Victor as a father
"No father had watched my infant days... I had never yet seen a being resembling me or who claimed any intercourse with me. What was I?" ... "I learned from your papers that you were my father, my creator; and to whom could I apply with more fitness than to him who had given me life?" (Gutenberg)
in this first quote, he wonders at his lack of a father, and attributes it to the fact that he is something other than human (like the family he is watching), though he does not know what he is. to him, the father is the blind man: someone who cares for the children and looks after them.
i may be contradicted by the fact that he does later say "you were my father" to victor (in the second quote), but i feel as though he is speaking literally here, saying that Victor is the man who made him, and therefore his father, despite the fact that Victor does not fit the role of the caring father he believes in. for the rest of his story, he refers to Victor as his creator rather than as his father to emphasize this point.
on Victor destroying the 'bride':
the reason I find that the fact that he destroyed it not as terrible as most of the other people I talk to is because the monster lied too him! The monster said he would not interrupt or interfere while Victor worked on the second creation. (post)
i'd like to start off by saying that i am not in the camp of people who think that Victor should have completed the 'bride', i just want to correct some things here to rearrange some of the blame here. the Creation does not promise to leave Victor alone while he works, he promises to
quit Europe for ever, and every other place in the neighbourhood of man, as soon as (Victor) shall deliver into (the Creation's) hands a female (Gutenberg)
he also promises to observe the entire creation process:
Depart to your home and commence your labours; I shall watch their progress with unutterable anxiety (Gutenberg)
he broke no promises; told no lies. he said exactly what would happen, and thusly it progressed. Victor was not moved to destroy the 'bride' because of the Creation's presence, he was moved to destroy her because he had a moment of clarity that showed him how flawed the assumption was that the Creation would be able to keep them both in check.
on the Creation's mindset:
And most of that is due to his child-like intellect. He thinks like a kid and immediately hates anything that makes it even slightly mad. (post)
i again reference the fact that the Creation is not child-like, and does not have child-like intellect. children don't read Paradise Lost, Plutarch's Lives, and the Sorrows of Werter and have complex thoughts relating to them. he has an understanding, however biased, of the world.
he is doing this for several convoluted reasons.
all of society violently rejects -- and tries to kill -- him, why should he be respectful of their lives?
Victor has deeply wronged him, and he wants to get back at Victor.
the Creation is all alone in this world, with no friends or family, and he must isolate Victor completely and violently so that Victor knows how he feels.
there's more than these, but i think you can get a gist from this. he is smart. he does not 'immediately hate anything that makes (him) slightly mad', he hates Victor -- with good reason, i might add -- who has made him completely mad.
on Victor's feelings towards his marriage with Elizabeth:
He literally says he would rather live the rest of his life alone than marry elizebeth. (post)
he doesn't literally say that anywhere that i have found. if you are referring to this sentence:
To me the idea of an immediate union with my Elizabeth was one of horror and dismay. (Gutenberg)
then i might remind you that it is followed with these sentences:
I was bound by a solemn promise which I had not yet fulfilled and dared not break, or if I did, what manifold miseries might not impend over me and my devoted family! Could I enter into a festival with this deadly weight yet hanging round my neck and bowing me to the ground? I must perform my engagement and let the monster depart with his mate before I allowed myself to enjoy the delight of a union from which I expected peace. (Gutenberg)
the reason the wedding brings him horror is because he knows that the Creation is attacking those he loves; he knows he can't participate properly in the wedding with the burden he is feeling. he explicitly states that he can't allow himself "to enjoy the delight of a union from which (he) expected peace." he only ever talks about the wedding as an event of great joy that is being prevented by the Creation.
this doesn't mean he isn't queer; his love for a woman doesn't disqualify any other love he may feel. i just wanted to point this out because it's one of the most common takes about Frankenstein that i disagree with.
on his love for Clerval:
He literally calls him so beautiful and practically worships Henry for just taking care of him. Having basic human decency. (post)
nothing much to say here except that he also calls Elizabeth beautiful and worships her in the novel, and also that what Clerval does isn't necessarily "basic human decency". Henry abandons the college life he worked so hard to achieve -- in fact, he abandons his entire life -- to wait Victor hand-and-foot. Henry takes care of Victor and nurses him back to life for two whole years, in which he could be doing anything else. to call that basic human decency is to undermine the extreme effort that Henry put into their relationship, in my opinion.
on Victor being gay for the Creation:
i don't really care either way for this theory, which i have seen before, but every time it surfaces, it's backed up by the most unhinged evidences
When Victor is swept up by grief, he makes it a point to only pick what he deems as the “most beautiful” parts of men for his creation. Essentially only making it what he deems as most beautiful. (post)
i'm fighting a losing battle with this point, but i don't think Victor's use of 'beautiful' in this sentence is indicative of actual aesthetic pleasure. the full sentence is:
His limbs were in proportion, and I had selected his features as beautiful. (Gutenberg)
it's a bit odd to give a clinical assessment of "His limbs were in proportion," and then follow it by calling them beautiful, no? and we must remember that the Victor that calls the features beautiful is not the same as the Victor who calls the lakes beautiful; when he chose the features, he was in his manic state of picking endlessly pursuing scientific achievement. in my opinion, when his scientific side says 'beautiful', it means optimal for success. to support my claim:
As the minuteness of the parts formed a great hindrance to my speed, I resolved, contrary to my first intention, to make the being of a gigantic stature, that is to say, about eight feet in height, and proportionably large. (Gutenberg)
almost immediately, he sacrifices aesthetics for the possibility of increased efficiency. these are not the words of a man who is greatly concerned with aesthetic pleasure.
This includes Genitals and is implied when he is worried The creation will reproduce. Now I don't want to sound too vulgar, but picking out the perfect dick and digging up possibly multiple graves to do it? That sounds pretty gay to me. (post)
i disagree that it is implied. obviously, the creature must needs have genitals in order to function, but there is nothing that hints at the fact that Victor picked 'the perfect dick', although he might have made an effort to pick the most seemingly in-tact, functional one.
i also resent the notion that grave-digging for penises is some symptom of being gay. has a negative connotation on it for gay people, and isn't something anyone in recorded Gay History has done, to my knowledge. that's just a personal gripe, though.
Do I believe the Monster was groomed by Victor mentally and would possibly have been physically too if Victor stayed with the Creation? Yes I do. (post)
at this point, i felt really lost. how could the Creation have been mentally groomed by Victor, who literally never interacted with him until forced? grooming is a long-term manipulation, Victor wasn't even around the Creation short-term.
also, we know that Victor is physically repulsed by the Creation...
these luxuriances only formed a more horrid contrast with his watery eyes, that seemed almost of the same colour as the dun-white sockets in which they were set, his shrivelled complexion and straight black lips. (Gutenberg)
... so why would he physically groom him?
that's all i've got. personally, i feel like the moral of the story is that neither Creation nor Victor are 'good' or 'bad', so i agree with you that they are equally bad. i think Victor did romantically love Elizabeth (although i believe that Elizabeth probably only had a familial or platonic love for him) and Henry. i think that Victor was driven to create the Creation by his greed for knowledge and scientific advancement, not because of his mother's death or his sexuality. but these are all my takes, and everyone is entitled to their own takes. this whole response thing is just me nitpicking and waxing analytical about an old favorite of mine.
also i'm super sorry if some of this came off rude, i try to keep a neutral/factual tone but i'm bad at it and i don't know how my tone comes off online </3 as i said in the beginning, i'm always happy when more people get into the Frankenstein community and book analysis.











