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[mortificentmistressofumbra]

a possible Frolloton-undertale style

[nib-mettaton]

Comic sneak peek - redoing old work

As some of you might already know, I’ve been mirroring my comics over at SmackJeeves. It isn't a complete mirror, though: while uploading my work over at SJ, I've been re-reading my old work, and I ended up finding some issues with continuity and clarity at certain points. 

Notably, my biggest gripe was with the "Calamus Est" story, which is what I would consider the first ever webcomic I’ve done. While I am proud of it, "Calamus Est" was a spur-of-the-moment piece of work (how I dove right into that without a script or thumbnailing I have no idea). So I wanted to re-do it proper. 

Normally, it’s not good practice to redo older comics, but exceptions are sometimes allowed when it comes to issues regarding continuity and clarity. In my mind, "Calamus Est" was one of those exceptions.

So I re-wrote the entire script and started off with the thumbnailing process. The original comic was 28 pages, the new version has an additional 10 pages and expands on a bunch of stuff. Unfortunately, I got stuck with jury duty and didn’t get around to sketching pages this week, so here’s the thumbnails for the first three pages, with the new script in the background.

Also, while stuck in jury duty, I did some sketches of Frolloton (@samserve) and Nunton (@picopepin) as a refresher on how to draw these characters later.

I don't think we're gonna see the alt clothing in the comic, but I thought it might be something nice to have for potential future comics.

[lou-voiceactor]

[lou-voiceactor]

@frolloton @samserve

This is a good thing, a pure thing. We must work to maintain this.

[blucolorpencil]

It’s him again, but unfashionable

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[lou-voiceactor]

Surprise @frolloton!

[lou-voiceactor]

This is the last Undertale comic dub I prepared, comic by @frolloton and an art piece from @spectrumelf.

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