I just have to rec you that fic! Part 1 "as Mac’s shout turned into a scream that came close to shredding Jack’s sanity. That wasn’t fear, that wasn’t anger. That was suffering. Anguish the likes of which he’d never heard come from his friend. “Mac!” Jack shouted, limping down the tunnel back toward where he left Mac patching himself up. The scream faltered and tapered and the moment it stopped, Jack’s world ended. “MAC!”
Part 2 other part, just to show you the awesomeness of the whump “Okay, kid, talk to me.”“’s like waves,” Mac ground out through his teeth. “Like knives inside me…under…under m’skin. But then it…,” he exhaled slowly, “it fades and all I feel is burning.” “Burning where?” Mac’s face folded slightly, his chin trembling and Jack wanted to simultaneously wrap him up tight and throat-punch the psycho who invented this stuff. “Everywhere,” he moaned…” Part 3 (last example) coming :).
3a: “Jack feeling Mac’s grip tighten every few steps, until Mac gasped and went to his knees, his hand coming completely loose from Jack’s shoulder. Jack turned to find Mac curled forward, his lower lip caught in his teeth as he tried desperately to keep his cry of pain suppressed.Jack turned and put his hands on Mac’s arms and the kid groaned and flinched away.“I’m sorry,” Jack pulled his hands up immediately. “I’m sorry, kid.”“God, Jack, I can’t…ahhhh!”
3b. “What can I do?” Jack asked helplessly, looking down the dark tunnel behind Mac, then at the stones surrounding them. Mac just shook his head, his rough exhales of breath sending dirt scattering away from him and he worked to get control of himself again. After what felt like an eternity, Mac seemed to slump, leaning sideways until he landed against a wall.“Fuck, this hurts,” he panted. “’s like…acid. Inside me.” –>Sight unseen by gaelicspirit. AWESOME!
Sight Unseen: Love it! Thanks anon for the lovey review!
