Throughout the critique each student’s z-fold reflected one of the six types of transitionary images by Scott McCleod.
Moment to moment - when images require little closure, streaming together in a sequence seamlessly
Action to Action - a single subject in progression
Subject to Subject - staying with a scene but utilizing reader involvement to render the transition meaningful
Scene to Scene - transporting the viewer across time and space, one panel could be one moment in time, while the next 10 years later
Aspect to Aspect - Bypasses time moves toward a different aspect of a place, idea or mood
Non-Sequitur - No logical relationship between subjects or panels.
My chosen picture, the Golden Gate Bridge being built along with the word “PLETHORA” was a Non-Sequitur of sorts, but added with the two pictures from fellow students it created...
- Aspect to Aspect - showing the building of a bridge in a mixture of man-made over nature juxtaposed against the fish in the natural space and gears and machinery in the making
- Using Avenir Next Condense to emulate the vertical span of the bridge and in reverse blended well with the imagery.
- The motion of the fish and the lines in the fish alongside the lines in the gears and the holes blended well as well as the motion of the ocean creating a movement throughout all three pages.
- Scene to scene - showing the building and another moment under the water to the gears in the machinery putting it together