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For context: Cory/Sloane( his nickname for her) and Harry were making out in a Jacuzzi like 15 minutes before.
She giggled and pulled him to her, pressing her lips onto his. She pulled his shirt off of him, going for his jeans before he stopped her.
She continued to kiss him, and he let her. "We-can't. I-" he tried to say between each kiss, huffing but complying. "Baby, Sloane hey. I don't want our first time to be like this, okay? I want you to remember everything." He told her, kissing her neck. She got visible goosebumps as she shivered, leaning her head up to give him more room. "Your mouth is saying one thing but your mouth is also saying something else." She whispered, quietly moaning as he sucked behind her ear.
"Okay. Yeah okay. We need to stop. Damn it." Harry pushed himself away from her. "It's fucking freezing. Want to take a bath?" He asked her, walking towards his bathroom.
She nodded and followed him, taking off her bra and underwear as he started the water. "No touching." Harry told her as she sat down, he looked away once he realized she was already naked. "For fucks sakes." He mumbled under his breath, taking off his boxers.
He sat against the back of the tub and she slid in front of him, leaning against his chest, trying to ignore his hard-on.
He hissed as she tried to get comfortable.
She moaned as the water got to the perfect temperature then turned it off, leaning against his chest quietly.
He began to massage her shoulders, tensing up every time she moaned. "Sloane you have to stop." He whispered in her ear as he began to rub her her chest, his fingers nearing her hard nipples then shying away causing her breathing to get higher and higher.
He continued to rub her stomach and chest, suppressing his moans as she slid against his length.
His hands dipped into the hot water for a moment then shook them off and put one of them over her right breast, kneading it like dough.
She moaned quietly leaning her head between his shoulder and neck, one of her hands coming up and gripping the back of his head.
His hands slid down to her clit, spreading it as he gently stroked it, another quiet moan and grip.
"I-I thought there was n-no touching." She whispered, her back grinding against his dick.
Harry let out a quiet moan as he continued to torture her clit, slow strokes, rubbing her thighs or breast with his left hand
"Come on." He whispered as he noticed her breathing getting heavier. The lights flickered then went out as she came, still sliding up and down against him.
Cory turned around to face him, pulling him in for a heated kiss, her folds riding against his length as she grinded up and down against him.
She sucked his bottom lip then let it fall back in to place as her lips moved to his neck. "Birth control. I'm on-... I'm on birth control” she mumbled as he grabbed his length and angled it at her entrance. "You r-ready?" She asked him, sliding down onto him.
He let out a sigh of relief, thrusting up into her as the water sloshed in and out of her.
"Oh my-okay." He moaned, gripping her hip as she kissed his earlobe then switched back to his mouth.
She squeezed him inside, her climax coming again. Booze always sped it along, she never thought she'd be so sad to come again.
"Come on Harry." She whispered in his ear as she squeezed again and he let out a moan of relief as he came in her, her following soon after as he slowed down.
He kissed her collarbones as she stayed on top of him, feeling his dick pulse inside of her.
The two looked at each other, smiling sloppily as they kissed feeling woozy as they came down from their highs.
"I think you were made for me." He whispered, hissing as she pulled him out of her and pumped him a few times. Then sat against the bathtub wall, clenching her walls around nothing.
Harry slowly stood up, his legs shaky and helped her up, wrapping a big towel around her body then grabbed one for himself.
"Go pee." He whispered, pecking her lips. She nodded and sat on the toilet, watching as he made sure his bedroom door was locked then fell on the bed, not bothering to get dressed.
Once she was done peeing, she washed her hands and joined him, her towel falling off as she laid next to him.
He scanned her body, staring at her as she slowly opened and closed her eyes.
He pulled her into him, she wrapped her legs around him as they kissed slowly, never wanting to stop.
He got up and put some boxers on once he was able to detach from her then grabbed a pair for her and one of his hoodies.
Cory had fallen asleep so he had to slowly slide the boxers on and the shirt on then place the blanket over her.
Harry kissed her forehead and pulled her body against his, wrapping his arms around her waist as he drifted off to sleep.