I randomly got hit with the inspiration to rewrite Actions Speak Louder.
Instead of Snow having her abilities dormant until someone speaks her true name (Hoenira) and eventually getting split in two with her abilities split as well, I was thinking of her already being two from the start. What I mean is when Floki finds Snow in the forest it's not just Snow but her twin Hoenira as well. They both have diluted abilities and Hoenira resents Snow for that because if Snow didn't exist then Hoenira would be at 'full power' and vice versa. Hope this makes sense because I miss Actions Speak Louder and I think this would fix what I felt went wrong with it the first time.













