Hi, this isn't much but I've revised one of my tyrus fics because I was re-reading it and I noticed a lot of mistakes and things I didn't really so I went through it and changed a few things that made no sense and added some dialogue, it didn't change much, but I would live for you all yo read it:
To Love
Summary:
- Cyrus feels tears prickling at his eyes, he blinks rapidly, willing them away as he looks into her dark eyes. “We read it all wrong,” He cries out.
“Read what? What are you talking about?” She urges, careful to keep her voice even.
“T.J.” Was his curt reply as more tears gathered. He turns his face up towards the sky, trying to prevent them from falling.
“What about T.J.? Did he hurt you?” She demands, unable to keep the anger from creeping into her voice.
“No no, not intentionally. I confessed and he said he was sorry, but he…he didn’t feel the same way.” Cyrus' voice breaks. -