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[sleepyspacebb]

“use your big girl words” sry sir suddenly my head is completely empty all i can do is whine

[rnanqo]

edit letter arrived so here is the draft 3 revisions changelog for my own obscure purposes:

went and marked up act ii with the four main tension threads i must keep track of and their various subthreads

moved firewain scene backwards 2 days (gotta rewrite this)

moved drudge work scene forwards a day (also gotta rewrite this)

added a couple lines of awful flirting in drinks-in-the-dark scene (tongues???)

next: go through act ii in order and make sure the tension threads all interact with each other how they're supposed to, and if they don't, MAKE THEM.

[xjaylahopkins]

[xespietamayo]

@joshlane

[xcorikhang]

[xreynadel]

[xwesjames]

[nympho-dolly-official]

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