inclineto replied to your post: inclineto replied to your post: the second quarter...
True, I'm not an especially discerning mystery reader: there are people who read them for the pleasure of detection, and people who read them to watch characters forced by circumstances to admit uncomfortable truths to and about one another. I'm in the second camp, so as long as the mystery isn't too ridiculously contrived, I'm mostly satisfied.
I think you're right that she's settled into a comfortable partnerships pattern, which is great in real life, but far less satisfying in fiction. (I also couldn't help but feel she was more interested in gleefully waiting to reveal the incredibly obvious about the brother, and while that fills the demands of a mystery for secrets, and secondary relationships are a trope of romance, this time it felt like a sop and a distraction.)
In conclusion: as I was reading, I kept wondering what this book would have been like from Fenella's POV. [And to change subjects, because the number of comments here is getting to be too much, thanks for the rec of Portrait; it's added to the list!]
I’m definitely in the second camp, as well, which I why I did enjoy the set-up of the side romance but was completely puzzled as to why the secrets and uncomfortable truths being revealed were theirs to Pat and not Pat’s and Fen’s to one another. The drama of their romance seemed to usurp the drama of Pat/Fen instead of run alongside it, which is why it felt so artificial and intrusive, I think, despite the fact that, as you say, there was nothing about it per se that was out of place. “A sop and a distraction” is entirely it: I’m not sure whether Charles got bored of writing her female characters or thought her readers would get bored of reading about them, but either way, it wasn’t a good look.
Though I understand that she was trying to mirror ToE’s one-narrator structure, I too found myself really missing getting a view into Fen’s head. (For that matter, I miss Daniel’s pov in ToE, too.) And while I see its purpose in ToE and I think I could see its purpose in PE, it felt like it robbed the book of a level of depth which it could hardly spare.
[Excellent; I’d be interesting to know what you think of it!]