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If you still need someone to read your story, im willing:)

Thank you! I’m always hoping for readers :) I’ll put the link in this when I’m off mobile

EDIT: http://figment.com/books/655932-Xero-s-Dystopia

[caffeinatedvagitarian]

Left me with more question than answers. And those are usually the ones I go back a reread, looking for new things that I may have missed. Im totally going to go read some of your other stories! so anyways I just wanted to say that and I hope you keep writing and publishing your stories for others to read. (I've wriiten some things but never gotten up the courage to post anything anywhere, or actually finish writing) So thumbs up to you for that :)

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Okay, you seriously made me so happy right now okay so A+ for you on compliments. And taking over my inbox is seriously 1000% okay because I don't get messages as often as I like so this is totes awesome

I'm really happy that you think so highly of my writing! Some of it I'm not too proud of but the thing is, with more practice, it will get better. I feel like I've improved so much, just within the last year alone. And the fact that you associate my style with some of your favorite books is such a huge compliment!

As for your writing, I definitely recommend a platform like Figment just because there's the opportunity to get feedback there and it's a very simple site to use, where you can edit the writings so easily- just rereading "Sorry" after you sent me the message allowed me to notice some grammatical errors I had overlooked and I was able to fix them quite quickly. And if you don't think that your writings are ready to be looked at, you can simply just save it as a draft so that only you can see it until you're ready for feedback.

I definitely plan to continue writing and I'll be so happy to hear from you when you read more of my works! Thank you so much!!!

[caffeinatedvagitarian]

(1) Sorry for probably taking over your ask, but I just wanted to say that your stories are seriously really good and well written! Every single one that I've read have left me satisfied but yet wanting more. Wanting the random questions that pop in my head to be answered and to me thats a mark of a good writer. If they can leave you wanting more, with you asking questions as you read 'wondering whats gonna happen' is the best. Some of my favorite books have left me with

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[caffeinatedvagitarian]

'Dreams' messed me up! It was such a huge plot twists. Jeez, it was super cute and then BAM! murder! Like what?! Ahhh i cant even. But now i wanna know if her nightmares were foreboding or if they were just a coincidence that the guy took advantage of to get her into his apartment. Dang there are literally no warnings, at first i thought it was just her nightmare taking a new turn but no, it wasnt a nightmare it was her reality! Anywho good job! youre really good at these plot twists!

Thank youuu!! I don't always know where I'm going with them but I kinda like the dark endings. And plot twists are really fun, especially if I think it's getting a little boring, so I can just throw in something totally unexpected and make it worth the read.

[caffeinatedvagitarian]

(Maybe sorta creepin on your stories) 'Nightmare' was cute until the end! Oh my gosh! I know I should have seen it coming but it was still a huge shock as I read the last lines! Is it weird that I'm glad that Annabel survived and he at least got her? Loved how it end with him 'signing' it. It was such a great little touch to the story that just wrapped it up perfectly. Now i wanna know if they crashed into someone or something? was it their fault?. what happens now? Ugh I wanna know!

Seriously, I have the biggest smile on my face seeing these messages about my stories <3 Thank you! With this one (I wrote this one a while ago), I feel like I meant it to have unanswered questions. Life doesn't have all the answers type of thing, ya know? Not everything will make sense and not everything will have a happy ending, but sometimes you can get close, and sometimes it will just be taken away when you least expect it. Seriously, I'm so glad you're reading the stories- it doesn't matter if you're creepin', I'm just glad for reads lol

[caffeinatedvagitarian]

I just read your story 'Sorry'. It was very good! Super sad, and even though it was short it was to the point and gripped you tight forcing you to finish. The questions 'why were they fighting' 'what happened' 'what could have happened if things were different' and many others were running through my head as I read. And I love how the letter went addressing how she wanted him to help with the funeral. The abortion was a plot twist for me, I didnt even think of that as I was reading. Good Job! :)

Thank you!! :) I'm very glad that you liked it and that I was able to elicit such a response- definitely reassures me as a writer. Seriously, thank you!

[cakekin]

Can I be Alister is your spn family? Please and thank you:)

Sure! I just added you honey :*   Join my Supernatural family?

[theshadowhunterofbakerstreet]

Question Game

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Favorite fast food restaurant? um...idk McDonald's i guess i don't really have a favorite.

What upcoming movie are you excited for? Catching fire!

Coffee, tea, or hot chocolate? coffee

You’re stranded on an island. What three things do you take with you? um a book, a knife, and a tent

Do you prefer a quiet, peaceful library or an intense, thrilling concert? a peaceful libary

What was the first fandom you officially joined? um... i guess and i'm sorry to say the twilight fandom.

Top three ships?ugh so hard to chose, clace, mystrade, jessa

Do you prefer cats or dogs? dogs

Movies or books? books are always better

What’s your favorite color? black or pink

Are you double-jointed? nope

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