Hi, I'm a rising senior in college hoping to attend grad school for computer science. Do you have any tips for writing a strong personal statement? How important do you think publications are?
Hi! I’m glad you’re looking into this so early and I’ll try to offer you advice pertaining to your question.
My top 6 advice points:
Think of what makes you stand apart from others. I know this is cliche, but it’s true. Then, try to back it up with a relevant example. I’ll give an example that my med school applicant friends have: the generic gist that most people give for the reason they want to become a doctor is because they want to help others, right? But the BEST med school essays I’ve read are when they not only talk about how they first got interested in medicine but how they made ACTUAL steps towards their interest/ actively contributed towards their interest. It’s one thing to just be like “oh yeah I like helping people and science and medicine so I want to be a doctor” but another thing to be like “I created an organization, I volunteered xx hours, I wrote this paper, etc” and I think that’s where lots of essays sort of fail. So basically, what I’m trying to say is: make sure you back up your interest with ACTION that you’ve done in your personal statement.
QUANTIFY YOUR ACCOMPLISHMENTS IN YOUR STATEMENTS!!! Instead of saying “I built 8 robots”, saying something like “I integrated 8 robots during my three months at the company, saving the company over $500,000 in costs” sounds much better. If your resume isn’t up to date with everything (specifically, try to quantify everything you can), definitely work on this. This helps in personal statements!
Let a handful of people of varying closeness review your essay. For me, tbh I am prideful, but I have to learn to let this GO. Because these people genuinely want to help you! If your essay sucks, it’s better you know from these people vs the admissions staff! The reason I say handful of people of varying closeness is because sometimes your close friends aren’t really great in writing, so you want more than one source. Better yet, ask a professor or a manager - basically someone who isn’t your friend. All of the people who reviewed my personal statements definitely helped me (even if I didn’t take in all of their suggestions!)
Try to tailor each personal statement to the college, if you can. For me personally, I tailored each personal statement slightly to the college I applied to. For UC Berkeley, I’d say something like “I would be honored to be admitted to UC Berkeley and can truly imagine myself walking through Sproul Plaza. The world-class staff is amazing for the field and blah blah and I’m confident I will become a better xxx from the program” (well, word it better; I’m free-balling here). Basically, explain *briefly* why you want this particular school and how you can see yourself FITTING in. Don’t overdo it though, obviously - it would look tacky.
Really pay attention to the specific prompt that each college states. Some mention to explain your interest, while others ask to explain why you want to attend this school, etc. Pay attention to the prompt and make sure you answer each component! Don’t just send out the same personal statement to each school!!!!!
Give yourself TIME to write. I’m not sure your process but for me, I give myself plenty of time. And I’ll just literally “ugly-write” (sorta free-balling writing, a very draft form of my essay). Then I’ll continually fine-tune it. Honestly, sometimes I’ll write and look back two weeks later and I’m like “ew that sounds weird” and reword it. Time helps give you some distance and able to see things in a different light.
Also, I’m not sure about publications for computer science but I’m thinking they definitely wouldn’t hurt! I think it falls under #1 & #2 above of standing apart & quantifying your accomplishments (I wrote xx publications that discussed xx and xx). You didn’t specify PhD or if this is a master’s program but from my understanding of phD programs (I’m in a master’s program), it’s research-heavy and a publication would definitely show you are interested in research so it’s like a necessity. For master programs, I think it wouldn’t hurt to have but my personal experience is that master programs aren’t as competitive so publications aren’t **necessary** but obviously they give you a super edge against other applicants!
Hope this helps!!















