#miniatureanxiouscat

[northern-passage]

"Noel compliments their scars, Clementine admires their muscles/strength and can quite literally grope the hunter's bicep in the lift (lol), and there are times where Merry can call the hunter "cute" in a way that is clearly meant to both annoy and fluster them."

Meanwhile Lea: You snore (affectionate)

:')

they're trying their best

[shai-manahan]

I have some 👀

The one who killed Hugo was Alex 👀

The leader of Cyro is Alex 👀 or they are somehow related to MC

I love Alex but he is SUS, sorry 👀

Well that's very interesting lmao I never knew someone would be so sus of Alex to this level 😂

(also I'd never refer to the father as Hugo anymore since I did change that part to be customizable)

Still, they're good assumptions, but who knows? All I’m sure of is that for one, during the father's death, the MC did remember that there were three people present there, although maybe, just maybe, there's still some stuff and details the MC wasn't remembering properly :))))))

But then maybe he did kill him 👀👀👀 we will see.

As for Cyro.... 😏

This is getting interesting, and I love the theories I've been seeing so far! If anyone else wanna share their theories, I'll definitely be very excited to see them!

[thenumbersgameif]

💙 BLUE HEART - do they miss their s/o easily? how do they act when their s/o isn't around? Thank you~

The ones who miss Four the quickest are definitely Zero and then Five, Three and One are more used to people coming and going without notice.

Zero is quieter when their significant others are not around, One grows restless easily, Three puts all of their focus into either a new project or a book to take their mind off of this, and Five mopes around, trying to find something to busy themselves with.

[if-mirrormine]

Loved the update, thank you <3

i thought that part would go down well😌

[shai-manahan]

Here to inform you that the page which ends with "Until now, a fool you still remain"? It ruined me. I cried. How dare? Thank you 😭</3

Ah, apologies, though to be honest that was completely the intention lmao. I just think it's both funny and sad that the Ripper, who was like one of the most feared and hated people in Gaile, could fall so hard for someone who had betrayed them just a few months ago to the point where they become, well, that—hence that option. Don't worry, I can feel your pain 🥲

[thenumbersgameif]

Thank you for the delicious chapter! I was so excited to meet the team! 🎈🥳

I thought I couldn't love Zero more, I was wrong 😭 First I picked the option to touch them, but the disappointment made me go "noooo!!1! 😭". So I turned back and tried to be a nice little Four for them 😭 How dare you write so good 😭

Also Boss? Lovely person 👍‍:') This was my feelings exactly:

Zero is tol and therefore a good shield from the mean boss~

also thank you!! I'm happy you enjoyed it <333

[thenumbersgameif]

In the masterpost "How was Four like pre-memory loss?" goes to a villain!FourxZero drabble, is… is it… intentional? :')

no, it's a mistake 😭

[shai-manahan]

Not to live in your inbox, but hello again :') Now I had time to calm down after reading the demo, I really wanted to make an actual comment.

First of all, your writing is so immersive I just… 🧍 I swear I could smell the rain, when it was raining in the story? Like how is it possible? While reading the dreams (hallucinations?) and memory gaps, I felt like I couldn't breathe and had to take a short break. It's absolutely amazing how you can convey these intense emotions and images with just words 🤯

Another thing is that my MC wasn't supposed to be still in love with Wesley :') I just wanted to check those choices to get a feel, but it was written so well, so soft and sad that I couldn't go back and change them :') I don't know, there's something absolutely terrifying and fascinating about someone being so deeply in love despite everything and it's a delight to read when written well. So this is all to say thank you for sharing your story and thanks for the tears :')

Also a bug: I think two variations for Jade appear at the same time when MC enters their office? And here is a typo: She took great risks at every step, made sure your to always have your back

Thank you! I think I'm able to convey the rain so clearly mostly because I love rainy seasons that much. Like, don't be surprised if it rains 90% of the time in the story lmaoo it can be really hot where I am. Also, there will be more scenes in the future where you might have to take some breaks, so please never hesitate to do that! It only gets more intense from here.

I’m actually loving that you all appreciate how the flashback scene has been arranged. I’ve hesitated a lot with that, and it wasn’t easy trying to force myself to proceed with the update because I constantly felt it wasn’t good enough haha so reading these thoughts is such a relief 🥺

By the way, did you start from a Chapter 1 save or a fresh one? If it's the former, that might be causing the issues with Jade's scene. If not, well, I'll be looking into it soon!