Wip Wednesday
thanks for the tag @sanguineerose! kind of a unique one. in the next chapter of Moon Trapped we've got the court singing a song just as a background activity. Did I have to write the song? absolutely not. Did I have to write it as an extended narrative poem in a rhyme and meter invented by jrr tolkien that i thought was cool but knew was exceptionally hard? no. but I did. fuck me.
...and it goes on like this for a dozen more verses. I just thought tolkien's was so beautiful and wanted to give it a shot. Now I am paying dearly for my hubris. i can't post the next chapter until it's finished, so i'm trying to get it done before sunday, even though I know most people aren't even going to read it. idk, hype me up people, this is dumb.
Anyway tolkien wrote two poems in this form. Errantry and Song of Earendil. It's written in quatrains with an ABCB rhyme scheme, but for each couplet, the last syllable of the first line rhymes with the fourth syllable of the second line. It's also written in iambic tetrameter. the words are arranged so that the emphasis naturally falls every second beat. For you music people, it's syncopated. And of course he throws in assonance and alliteration wherever he can. The overall effect is that it's got a very rhythmic quality.
np wip wednesday tagging for @smokeyguro, @darkimaginativeplace, @bellamybelladonnao3, and @laughing-sock










