Hello, could you scan my poem, please? 💕
Get away, my tightness deep in the own chest,
Whenever I see you with another conquest,
The next day, your princess, will she be far gone?
I shiver in my blue thick cover alone
scansion:
◡ ◡ – / ◡ – ◡ / – ◡ ◡ / – – Get away, / my tightness / deep in the / own chest, ◡ – ◡ / ◡ – ◡ / ◡ ◡ – ◡ / – ◡ Whenever / I see you / with another / conquest, ◡ – ◡ / ◡ – ◡ / ◡ – ◡ / – – The next day, / your princess, / will she be / far gone? ◡ – ◡ / ◡ ◡ – / – – ◡ / ◡ – I shiver / in my blue / thick cover / alone
meter: The first 3 lines have a clear pattern are underlyingly three amphibrachs plus a spondee, with some anaclasis within the spondees in the first line. Line 4 keeps the same number of syllables as the previous lines but diverges rhythmically after the first foot.
rhyme scheme: AABB' (line 4 has a slant rhyme)