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“Missing Dad” (short story - Starlight + Shadow)

#shadow the hedgehog #Starlight Nova #Sonadow #<- technically #sonadow fankid #20yearslater au #tissuesforissues #sorry for any grammar mistakes #Or typos #🩷#More short stories coming when i feel like it!

ok so like i had this idea for a while n it took me MONTHS to finish bc i was nvr content w/ my writing n whatnot yadda yadda yadda anyway,, this is basically a what if thing about the triads shooting trevor in ludendorff n michael realizing how dumb he is

(my apologies that it’s so fuckin looooooong but I didn’t wanna leave it on a short note that felt incomplete. hope y’all like it !!!!! sorry for any grammatical errors or if the formatting’s funky)

Why didn’t he realize it sooner? Was he stupid? No, no. He was just blind. Blind for the past 10 years. Who knows. Maybe even longer than that. Fucking Michael. It always came back to that venomous shithead, constantly ruining everything for him. Did he just... forget? Was he so focused on that bloodsucker when he was “dying” in front of him he completely forgot Brad got shot first? That Brad died first? He didn’t even really think about him when shit went down. Or care much about Brad in general for that matter. The guy was a dick who just worked with other dicks back in the day, eventually joining their motley crew. A fading memory more than anything. His primary focus had always been Michael, who he thought was his right hand man. Trevor always knew that there was something different about him. As frustrating as Michael could be, it still didn’t change how he felt deep down. Michael wasn’t like the others. Or at least, that’s what he had thought. The night he found out that Michael’s lie ran deeper than he led on was one he wouldn’t forget.

He arrived at Michael’s house in a short amount of time. Hopping up the steps he made his presence known, standing in the entrance of the living room. He plopped down next to Michael, who scooted away from him slightly, still not ready for close contact from Trevor.

“Family ain’t back yet, huh?”

“Nope.”

“She’s a Goddamn fool, man.”

Trevor was never one to hide his jealousy towards Amanda. The two had been going at it for years, and it was always regarding Michael. Catty behavior between two people who had complicated relationships with the man, in their own unique ways. Amanda was scared of Trevor, but was never afraid of talking shit to his face. It was never any serious threats whenever they shot petty quips at one another anyway. She knew Trevor would never kill or harm her, all thanks to Michael, who spoke up again.

“Despite all the chaos of these last few weeks, I think I finally figured it out… I know, it sounds ridiculous-“

To Trevor, the thought wasn’t ridiculous. He knew Michael would never change. He would always be a killer, a man of action through and through. He was wasting away on a couch, rewatching classic Vinewood every night. To him, it only seemed right for Michael to keep taking scores.

“You’re back man!” He proclaimed, emphasizing his next line, “We are back!”

With excitement in his eyes, Trevor went on to boast about the little clique they had formed, and how they only needed to bust Brad out to fully reunite. Michael looked solemn, shaking his head slightly.

“That’s not it. I got money, it just makes you miserable-“ Now it was his turn to have excitement shine in his eyes.

“I wanna make movies.”

“Great. That’s great… and uh, so where exactly does this leave me in the second act of your life?”

He felt his stomach sink somewhat, regretting having asked that question. Michael would always tiptoe around it, avoiding the inevitable. But he couldn’t run from the past anymore. It would always catch up to him.

“This is not a game to me! Alright? This is a fuckin’ way of life.”

“I got a fuckin’ family!”

“Yeah, well, I got nothin’! No one gives a fuck about me!”

There was a pause. A hesitation. Amber eyes looked sorrowfully yet savagely into pale blue ones.

“I do.”

Something in Trevor snapped hearing those words. He couldn’t stand the audacity of Michael saying that to him. Because to him, Michael didn’t seem to give a fuck about what happened to Trevor. No matter how many times he lamented to him about everything he went through.

“Oh… Fuck you.”

Trevor rose from his seat, beginning to pace around the room, stabbing a finger in Michael’s direction. He did nothing but stare between his feet, not bothering to look up at Trevor.

“I saw your grave. I mourned you. And then it turns out that everything I fucking thought about you was wrong. Everything! You’re not dead, and you’re not a man.”

Michael shot up from his seat, cool demeanor abandoned in a fit of anger.

“Well, what the fuck are you?”

“I’m your fucking nightmare!”

“Yeah, enough with your Goddamn threats!”

Trevor did nothing but scoff at him, backing away like he was about to leave the room. Instead, some kind of alarm went off in his head, urging him to stay and ask the question he pushed far into the back of his mind. The inevitable was happening, and he couldn’t ignore the need to ask anymore. If Michael himself stood before him alive as ever, then who the fuck was in Michael Townley’s grave? Then suddenly, and ultimately, it clicked for him. Fucking Brad.

“You treacherous piece of shit! You’re fuckin’ dead! You’re fucking dead!”

As it clicked for Trevor, it clicked for Michael.

“Oh, fuck! Trevor! Hey, T!”

He peeled out of the driveway in Michael’s car. God, it smelled just like that fucking prick. It made him want to cry.

“Fuck!” He screamed out to no one in particular.

He slammed on the gas and wiped away any forming tears. His phone began to ring and he saw an all too familiar photo appear. Michael. What the fuck could he possibly say or want right now?

“Fuck you.” He spat out.

“Hey, come on. Where you going?”

“You know where I’m going, fuck you!”

The fucking nerve of him to ask that. What was wrong with him? The rest of the conversation wasn’t any better. It sounded like some stupid break up between two teens, as if Michael had cheated on him with some hooker instead of lying about the past decade or so.

“Trevor, come on!”

“Fuck you Michael! Soon enough, I will.”

He was on his way to the air field, and dialed up Ron as soon as he could. He needed to get out of here before Michael could stop him.

“Trevor? It’s great to uh..”

“Is there a plane I can use? Get me across country?”

“Sure! Sure. We got one fueled up for a trip south of the border.”

“I’m taking it.”

“Is everything okay, man?”

“Everything is not okay. Nothing has ever been okay but I’m going up there to see it for myself. I’m going to see an old friend alright? If you’re where I think you are buddy...”

Trevor gripped the steering wheel harder until his knuckles turned white. Tears stung his eyes, but he couldn’t bring himself to let it out.

“I don’t know why I didn’t see it. I guess.. I guess I didn’t want to. Fuck!”

He clutched his phone tightly as he spoke, cracking the already shattered screen more. His voice was faltering, and it became harder to speak clearly.

“Maybe I knew all along. I’m gonna find out for sure and I’m gonna... do something about it! God there was always something wrong with that job, what went down after I guess I-“

The tears made their way down his face. His voice trembled and threatened to crack.

“I guess I wanted to believe- Fucking.. Fucking flea circus!”

He couldn’t hold it in any longer. Too many things began to resurface. Seeing red, he just cried out to Ron, still on the phone patiently listening to him rant.

“Idiot! Idiot! Idiot!”

“I’m sorry Trevor...”

He slammed on the gas as he approached the airfield. Running over to the plane, he hopped in and began his journey to Ludendorff. As he left, storm clouds poured in and darkened the sky. A thick rain accompanied by the thunder and lighting combo shook the small plane he was in. He braced himself for the rest of the trip there and kept going.

Ludendorff was just like he remembered. Cold, empty, and super fucking depressing. Why was the midwest like this all the time? Sure, living it up in Sandy Shores wasn’t the most ideal but for fucks sake, at least it was warm. He pulled up to the cemetery shortly after landing, and hurried off to find that God forsaken grave. After glancing at each passing gravestone, there it was. The late great Michael Townley’s place of burial.

“Who you got in here..?”

He scoffed, knowing his answer.

“As if I need to ask...”

It took forever to reach the coffin. The wood was brittle, which meant it would be easy enough to pry open and see who was actually in Michael’s place. He had been so caught up in his digging he didn’t notice a set of steps coming at him.

“You’re wasting your time.”

Trevor was wasting his time? No, he was making perfectly good use of it. Michael was wasting his if anything. Flying all the way out here for what? No, don’t say it... Was it finally gonna happen? Was Michael waiting for the opportunity to finally take a pop at him and leave his carcass for good? To toss him right into the grave with Brad? He didn’t want to believe so but hey, it’s Michael. Who knows what he’ll do. He couldn’t bear to listen to another word that came out of his mouth, and knew he needed to get the jump on him.

“You reptilian motherfucker!”

How did it end up here? Why was he pointing a gun at Michael? What the fuck was he doing? He didn’t want to kill him. He never did, even if he had a million justifiable reasons to.

“I didn’t want it to have to come to this.”

There it was again. The fucking lying. That same exact fucking lying that got them here to begin with.

“Yes you did! You just don’t have the fucking balls to do it! But I do!”

But Trevor was also a hypocrite. He didn’t have it in him to ever go through with killing Michael. No matter what the son of a bitch did to him, he meant too much to Trevor for him to ever consider killing the man himself. He didn’t want to think about being the cause of him dying for good.

“I’ve got more to lose than you!”

“Never a truer word has been spoken, brother.”

He said that with as much malice as he could muster. Michael was the farthest fucking thing from being a brother. This was a man he had loved. Hell, still loved, despite it feeling more and more like a stranger before him with each encounter they had.

“Now.. pull the fucking trigger.”

The air was too still. It was choking him, making him feel frozen. Sure, weather played a part in the feeling but this... was different. His blood felt like ice. He couldn’t do it.

“You ain’t got the guts.”

Neither of them could do it. Even if he fired he knew he’d miss. Michael had the upper hand here.

“Take the fucking shot!”

Wait. Was Michael... crying? No. No way the great Michael fucking Townley was actually crying over this. That motherfucker. He’s such a fucking fraud. A coward. Always running. Running from Trevor, his past, his problems, his family and his fucking emotions.

His train of thought had been interrupted when he heard snow faintly crunching not too far from them.

“What was that?-“

A noise shot through the tense air that surrounded them. Woosh. Fuck. No. It couldn’t be- Ow. No. No fucking way. He looked down in awe and there it was, a distinct bullet hole, pierced through his torso. It nearly missed his heart, but was most certainly in a spot to do enough damage to him. He looked back up at Michael, mouth slightly agape leaking with the blood that began to pool in his mouth. Peaking behind him, he saw two figures lingering far behind. The fucking Triads. Of course, how could he forget? It’s not everyday you slam the head of a Chinese mobster’s son into a post. Fucking shit. If only he hadn’t messed with Tao…

He was fucked, and he didn’t know what to do. All he knew was that he felt himself wanting to collapse on the ground. Michael looked at him in pure disbelief, eyes wide enough to pop from his head. Normally Trevor would giggle at the sight, but any noise from him would be a gurgle of blood in place of it.

“…Trevor?”

That was enough to knock him to the ground.

“Mr. Phillips! Mr. Cheng wants a word with you!”

Michael whipped his head back, and began dragging the two of them to cover. Was that supposed to be a fucking warning shot?? The one who shot Trevor spoke in Chinese to the other gunman, then spoke in English to the duo.

“Phillips! You and your boyfriend cannot hide from us!”

Michael grabbed his gun and started firing back, clipping the two in the front instantly.

“Trevor… what the fuck did you get into?! What are they on about? I… I’m not…”

Trevor couldn’t speak. He could only murmur at the man beside him.

“Trevor, seriously, you better answer me because I’m pretty fucking lost here-“

He angrily turned his head back to find Trevor on the verge of slipping out of consciousness, his face dropping at what was before him.

“Ah, Trevor! Shit!”

Before Michael could help him out, a van burst through the gate to the left, and more yelling ensued.

“Get out the van! Go find them!”

Michael panicked, pushing his gun into Trevor’s limp hands so he could grab the dead Triad henchman’s sturdier gun. He fired and clipped a few more men, trying his best to keep an eye on Trevor. His breathing was shallow, and he attempted to prop himself up so he could fire at them too.

“Trevor, what the fuck is going on? Who are these guys?”

“It’s the fucking,” He winced, pushing himself onto his knees so he could grab the side of the grave they hid behind. He spit out some blood that leaked from his mouth, staining the snow beneath them.

“The God damn Chinese, sugar tits.”

“Why are they-“

“Ask questions later, I’m fucking bleeding out here.”

Trevor forced himself to fully stand, his legs wobbling slightly. He fired a few more rounds, face contorted in pain. Another bullet flew by him, grazing his side.

“Fuck! Ow!” He growled.

“T, what in the hell are you doing?! Get down!”

“Fuck off you fucking leech! I can-“ He spit out more blood.

“I can handle this myself!”

He groaned, keeping his aim as still as he possibly could, which wasn’t very still at all. Stubborn as ever, Trevor went in guns blazing. He used not only the gun Michael had forced into his hands, but also the one he had brought with him. Several more shots fired at him until he felt a hand yank him back to the ground. He fell with a slight thump, and pain jolted through him again.

“You crazy bastard! We’re getting the fuck out of here, but that can’t exactly be accomplished if you’re dead!”

“Oh please! You already want me dead you fat fucking snake!” He wheezed out.

“Jesus Christ- Trevor. I already told you-“

“Shit, Mikey-”

Before either one could do anything about it, a Triad that had snuck up on them pistol whipped Michael in the back of the head. Trevor scrambled backwards and attempted to get on his feet, but to no avail. In a last minute effort, he lifted Michael’s gun and fired. For someone who was labeled a lousy shot by his partner, he felt that Michael would’ve been proud of his aim at that moment in time. A clean shot, right between the fucker’s eyes. He grinned slightly, adrenaline still coursing through him. He barked out a laugh, forgetting how much of a chore it was to allow any noise to escape him. It caused him to break into a coughing fit, spitting up more blood onto the snow. He looked from the small circle of blood that formed in front of him, back to Michael’s limp body. He shoved him slightly, trying to nudge him back into consciousness.

“Mikey. Michael. Get up. We gotta go like you said-“

He heard another van pull up. Then another. Fuck.

“You gotta be shitting me..”

Trevor, disregarding his wounds weakening him to the point his vision grew spotty, swapped his handgun for the gun Michael grabbed. He tried his best to prop the other man up against a grave, well out of the Triad’s line of sight. He pushed through any pain he felt, still riding his adrenaline high, wiping the rest of them out one by one. He rushed back over to Michael, who was stirring awake.

“Michael, for fucks sake get up already! Jesus I’m still fucking bleeding and I have to save your ass right now? Come on!”

He was finally able to stand, and Trevor slung Michael’s arm around his shoulder, helping him regain his balance. They helped one another walk through the mess of snow, blood, and bodies to get to the rental car, which surprisingly was still in alright shape. Across the train tracks, one more van started to pull up, right before the nightly train passed through town.

“Haha! Thank you train for being useful this time!”

He forgot how much it hurt to laugh, clutching his side and muttering curses under his breath as the two raced over to the car. Michael hopped in the driver’s seat after placing Trevor in the passenger’s side. Trevor’s adrenaline rush began to die down along with the rest of him. Michael raced out of the cemetery, narrowly escaping the left over henchmen. Glancing over at Trevor, he realized how shit of a shape he was in. Despite not living in North Yankton in close to 10 years, he still remembered where all the nearby hospitals were. It wasn’t ideal, considering what they were doing up there and who they were and what not, but it was better than having Trevor die on the spot.

“Hey, don’t you fucking die on me right now buddy. There’s no way you ain’t surviving the shit show we just went through, which only happened thanks to you.”

Trevor asked himself why Michael was still giving him snide remarks about his unruliness. He figured now wasn’t the time to really argue, but still tried nonetheless.

“You… fuckin’ snake.. you think you’re so..”

“I’m so what Trevor? No you know what- Don’t speak right now, but try to stay awake, please?”

“Mmph..”

The ride out of Ludendorff was quiet. The radio was off, and neither one chose to speak. Michael of course was driven mad by the silence.

“…Look. Trevor I- I fucked up. There’s nothing I can do now to fix it, no matter how many times I apologize. But you do- You do know that I cared about you then, and I care about you now…”

Trevor did nothing but grunt in response, eyelids heavy. Michael sighed.

“We’re almost to a hospital. They’ll fix you up good, and- and you’re gonna be fine. You ain’t dying on me yet. I mean- you’ve survived worse? You.. I…”

He huffed out a breath, gripping the steering wheel tight. The rest of the ride was silent, save for Michael making sure Trevor was still alive and conscious. They made it to the hospital, with Michael carrying him fireman style, seeing as Trevor was very lanky compared to him. He called out for someone to help, using his gift of lying to say that Trevor was just shot by a random mugger, so the report back wouldn’t seem too suspicious. He patiently waited for word back from a doctor, eventually seeing someone come to him with a clip board.

“Are you… Franklin?”

Michael had been smart enough to give them both fake names, but he just blurted out the first two names that came to mind. Right now, he went by Franklin, and for all they knew Trevor was Lamar.

“Yes, that’s me.”

“Your friend is in critical condition, but you got him here just in time. Any later and he wouldn’t have made it.”

The last sentence caused Michael’s ears to ring.

“He’s going to be out of surgery soon, the bullet wound was pretty deep.” The doctor narrowed their eyes slightly, getting ready to write the report down.

“You said that he was mugged?”

“Yeah. The guy fired at him and ran off. Didn’t get a good look at his face.”

“Hmm… well alright. I’ll let you know when your friend is ready for visitors.”

The rest of the night was painfully slow. By the time Trevor was out of surgery, he was still hopped up on morphine, allowing him to rest properly for the first time in forever. Michael sheepishly walked in, careful not to be too loud. He made his way over to Trevor’s side, sitting in the seat next to his bed. He hadn’t seen Trevor look so content like that in so long. Not since... those days. He spoke to himself, seeing as Trevor was fast asleep.

“You worry me so much you dumbfuck… why do you pull the shit you pull? I mean.. shit. I… I love you, man. I do. But what if you died without ever hearing that from me again? Is that the reason why you get like this? Shit. Right. I’m such a fucking idiot.”

Besides everything about Ludendorff, it angered Trevor to his core that Michael could never admit he loved Trevor unless he was drunk or alone. In this instance, he technically was. Trevor was peacefully dreaming, while Michael felt restless. He proceeded to fumble around for his cellphone to reach out to Franklin, who had been wondering what happened to them. He knew Franklin would probably be up anyway.

Yo Mike, where u at? Trevor too, Lamar n I gotta do one last job wit him.

Currently in North Yankton kid. Trev found out about Brad. Some Chinese gangsters rolled on us, T got shot. Be home soon hopefully.

Oh shit. Stay safe out there homie. See u soon ig.

Michael let out a breath he didn’t know he was holding, looking back up at Trevor. He tried to think about what he would do next. Knowing that visiting hours were limited, he felt a twinge of guilt knowing he’d have to leave Trevor alone for a night after what happened. But it was late, and he couldn’t stay there overnight. He figured he’d have to bunk in some cheap motel for the time being. Just until Trevor and him were ready to leave North Yankton. He spoke to the doctor from before to let them know he would come back the next morning. When he arrived at the nearest shit motel, he still couldn’t find it in him to sleep. He was tired, sure, but his mind wouldn’t allow him to drift off. Even if he did, he would find himself jolting awake, the scene of Trevor getting shot playing over and over in his head. He’d almost been responsible for Trevor’s death once, he couldn’t let it happen for real. What would he do anyway if he did die? He quickly brushed the thought off, not wanting to consider the possibilities.

He returned to the hospital the next morning, half awake from the lack of sleep. Visiting hours were early, and he wanted to get them both out of here as fast as he could. Walking to Trevor’s room, he saw the man sitting upright looking out the window. North Yankton may have been cold as a bitch, but from time to time it had real pretty sunrises. He knocked lightly on the door, and Trevor turned to face him.

“Hey, T…”

He couldn’t read the expression on his face.

“I thought you left.”

“Visiting hours are limited, T. You should know that by now.”

He didn’t say anything in response, facing back towards the window instead. Michael sat down in one of the chairs across from him.

“You.. you worried me. I thought-“

“You thought what, cupcake? That I’d just die on the spot, and you could just leave my dead body there-“

“Trevor! For the last time that wasn’t my fucking plan!”

Their voices steadily increased above the normal level it should’ve been for a hospital setting.

“Then why did you have a fucking gun, huh Mikey?”

“I could ask the same for you!”

“Oh of course, turn the situation onto me again-“

“You brought a gun for what, Trevor?!”

“That’s not the issue at hand here!”

“Yes it is!”

A voice chimed into their argument.

“Excuse me. You,” A nurse who walked in pointed at Trevor.

“You need to rest. And sir, I’m not sure who you are, but if you want to stay as a visitor I suggest you lower your voice and behave.”

The two men looked at each other angrily before sitting back down. The nurse exited, most likely wanting to return later so Michael could discuss discharging him. Silence filled the room briefly.

“T… I meant what I said.” His voice had dropped to a whisper.

Trevor didn’t look him in the eye. His arms were crossed, and he just looked out the window.

“I could’ve lost you.”

The other man still said nothing.

“I could’ve lost you and you would’ve died not knowing I..” He trailed off.

Trevor turned back to look at Michael while speaking.

“Knowing what? You hiding something else from me, porkchop?”

“I…”

“Spit it the fuck out Mikey or I swear to God-“

“I love you.”

His felt his stomach twist uncomfortably, and his hands became clammy. He finally forced the words out, sober.

“I love you.” He repeated, shutting his eyes so he wouldn’t have to look at Trevor while saying it. He chose to look at his feet instead.

“I’m sorry I didn’t say it sooner. And I just.. kept thinking that you could’ve died not hearing that from me ever again.”

He didn’t notice it at first, but tears brimmed his eyes. Trevor’s scowl fell and his face softened.

“What?” Was all he could choke out.

“Don’t.. don’t make me say it again.” He said, face flushing red.

“You..” Trevor didn’t finish his sentence. He shuddered in his seat, ready to cry himself. He buried his face in his hands, muffling something incoherent.

“What?”

He lifted his head up, tears streaking his cheeks.

“I’m so sorry, Michael.”

“Sorry for what?”

“For.. being like this.”

Trevor was a lot of things. You couldn’t just describe him in only one word. Michael tried sifting through the options of what he meant.

“I pushed you so hard back then I.. I thought I was losing you. I didn’t want to. All it did was make you want to leave even more.” Trevor kept sniffling.

“Trev…”

“Why Michael? Why do you do this to me?”

He wanted to ask him “Do what?”, but they both knew the answer. Michael never let his feelings be more than surface level. He was repressed and Trevor hated it. Trevor continued to cry, and the tears that Michael held in spilled.

“Hey.. don’t… don’t apologize, T. Please.”

“I..” He hiccuped.

“I’ve loved you for so long. Why couldn’t you have done the same?”

Michael kept his head down. He didn’t want to see the heartbroken expression on Trevor’s face. It only made him feel worse.

“You left me.”

“I didn’t want to.”

“But you still did. Telling me that doesn’t change anything. You became another person in my life that I loved and then you left. Same as always for me.”

Everything Trevor loved was always out of his reach. Flying, his mother, Michael, Patricia… He could go on. Nothing was ever gonna be permanent for him.

“But I’m here for you now, T. I’m not going anywhere.”

He finally looked up to see Trevor’s sad eyes burning a hole right through him. His silence told him it’d be a long while before he could believe his words.

“Now.. uh. Let’s get the fuck outta this place.”

It didn’t take long for Trevor to be discharged. The doctors had told him he should stay for another day or so, but only got an irritated response from Trevor. Figuring the duo wouldn’t budge on wanting to leave, he was signed off for clearance. They eventually found the plane Trevor flew in on, and made their way out of the state. Neither one knew if this would change anything between them, but Trevor felt more at ease around him. It would still take time and effort for any left over wounds to heal, but for right now, Trevor was content.

#gta v #michael/trevor #trikey #fanfic #this is my first fic #i’ve never done this before #i really hope you guys like this despite how fucking long it is #sorry for any errors #or typos

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Anonymous said:

I've been a bit nostalgic recently and I was watching the SD from the 2014 Olympics and looking at their protocols and do you know if they ever said where they went wrong with the first pattern? Because they lost a level from not hitting the last keypoint and I'm no technical expert but I watched most of the SD and I didn't see where they went wrong.

Okay, here we go, LOL. I remember at the time trying to figure out "what went wrong" but I had a lot of issues with it at the time, which I won't get into. But, I'll try to keep to the subject instead of my emotional reaction to it, LOL.

So my first step was to refresh myself on what the key points were and which key point cost them the level. So, a quick refresher:

At the time, there was no partial step sequence. Teams were required to do one full pattern of the Finnstep, which took a full circuit of the rink. The pattern was then broken into two separately marked sections, with each section containing three key points. So, when you look at the protocols for VM, they had 1FS3+kpYYN and 2FS4+kpYYY.

http://www.isuresults.com/results/owg2014/owg14_IceDance_SD_Scores.pdf

That means that in the first section of the Finnstep, they did the first two key points correctly, and the third was done incorrectly, and in the second section of the Finnstep, they did all three key points correctly.

To make things more complicated, as per usual, each key point is not a single feature. That is, usually you must do several steps, each on a correct edge, or a correct turn, to actually earn the key point, and to miss any of those edges or turns means losing a level.

That is where this visual was very helpful to me:

http://icedanceanalysts.blogspot.ca/2013/12/the-fun-steps-of-finnstep-identifying.html

Key Point 3 Man Steps 20-21 (XB-LFI, RFO-Sw3/RBI Tw1/RBI) The male partner crosses his left leg behind his right on a forward inside edge and as soon as he gets on this edge he brings the right leg up and crosses in front of his left without touching the right foot down on the ice before moving it back to its regular alignment and setting it down on a forward outside edge. On this same forward outside edge, the male partner completes a swing three turn, exiting this turn on a back inside edge. This edge becomes the entry edge for the single twizzle that follows, and the male partner exits this twizzle on the same right back inside edge.

It discusses the key points of the Finnstep as well as providing gifs to illustrate the movement, and if the post I am writing is of any interest to you, please visit the link to clarify your own understanding of what I am looking at.

So, the key point missed by VM was the third key point of the first section and so, it was Scott's key point. But which part of the key point did he miss? There are a number of edges and turns he completed. So, I went to the video, at about 2:08:

Now, I will pause and say that the technical panel has access to footage that we cannot see. Whether we deserve to see them is a different argument and a long standing one with figure skating fans. But the angles we see of this key point is not very helpful when trying to analyze Scott's edges. Without the benefit of an angle facing the skaters from the front (or back), it is difficult to ascertain if he is on a proper edge or not. The key point was not one of the elements featured in the replays, so there is no alternate angle to review.

For comparison's sake, here are some of the other SD's which were awarded a Yes for the key point being discussed:

at about 2:39

at about 1:26

I am unable to help any of us understand the loss of the point and of the level. I am *not* saying that they deserved the point, or that the other teams I chose to show didn't deserve them. I am saying that without a better angle of the steps being discussed, I am not capable enough of being able to see the error.

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On another note, I would like to say that in another post from a couple of days ago, I said I thought that I recalled VM getting better GOE on the element where they lost their level, than DW, who did get there level, and that it was, ironically, the only element in the SD that VM out-GOE'd DW. My memory on that aspect was correct.

And on that note, I should probably stop typing before I revisit my 2014 self and start ranting, LOL.

#FYI #(even their no-touch midline! the injustice! LOL - stopping now)#also please forgive any formatting errors #or typos #I had to fight with my computer for this one

So here is the old fanfic like I said. This is a Momma CQ fanfic i did like almost 2-3 years ago (i wasn't even in tumblr at this time, i think). I just made a few changes with some stuff, also sorry it's kinda of long.

WARNING: Long, occasional curse words(mostly from me), death, this is really old so it’s not the current Momma CQ world. Credits: Momma CQ by @alainaprana Characters by @loverofpiggies & @comyet Inspiration(idea came from): comic with Kid!Geno and Geno by @slylock-syl

And before we begin I wanna give a comment; “I still feel like this was really stupid cause damn so *SPOILER WALL* and if you don’t want to read about any fucked up shit and a little kid dying I advice you not to read this” (also sorry for any mistakes, english is not my first language, and i highly reccomend you check out the comic in the link above) -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Anyway let's begin: Geno(the older one, I'll call him Sans cause it's easier): "Don't worry you'll be better then okay. *sigh* but I guess now is better than that day uhn?" Geno (kid one I'll just call him Geno.) looked questionably. Sans asks after a little pause "oh right what day is it for you today?" Geno answers "it's the 15 of February, 2019." (yo just so you know this is a random date so don't think too much about it) "Oh", exclaimed Sans "I see, [*whisper* no wonder] well you'll get well soon don't worry". He pats Geno in the head and walks to the door but turns one more time to Geno and says "Oh and remember stay happy and rad, after all you wouldn't wanna be unradical would you. Good luck, take care of our little bros don't belittle your life, and maybe you'll be able to do what i failed to" you could hear a little hint of sadness in the last part. Geno might not have understood this now but he would in not so long. It had been 5 months since Sans appeared in front of Geno now. It was his lucky day. The 5 months had passed like wind it was all normal the same as always painkillers, exames, error beating the living hell out of fresh (he needs to chill) and sometimes Geno would come home. But today it was different he wasn`t just coming home he was officially out of the hospital, now fully recovered. CQ was on her way to pick him up together with a very excited Error and Fresh like always, but even though he was like always he was still `happy` that his more radical bro would come back. After a little while CQ was already in the hospital to pick up her son, together with error and fresh. They entered the room Geno was assigned and there was Geno as happy as possible standing there waiting for them. CQ was in tears of happiness as she hugged her son then Geno said out of the embrace "mom your squishing me" "oh sorry", said CQ back, "I'm just happy your back with us." CQ moved a little farther away from the hug and Error come next “Geno”, he said happily. He didn`t like physical contact much but he tackled his bro in a pretty strong hug like his phobia never existed. "hey Error", Geno says with a smile. "Sorry, well welcome back.", Error said after realizing what he was doing. "I’m back", responded Geno with a huge smile. On the way to the car for Geno`s surprise Aunt Com and Ink were in the car. "guys", said Geno in surprise. "Hey Geno you're back", said Ink excited and loud. "yeah ", Geno responded. "good, and try to be a little quieter he just got out of the hospital Ink", said Com. "I'm sorry", said Ink. "no, no it's okay i got out of the hospital but I'm at full potential now", said Geno. You could hear a few sighs and then Com said, " well then come on in already". They then passed 10 minutes discussing who would seat where. In the end Error and Ink were in the front seat sharing the seat(no police, nah not in my fanfic), CQ driving, and Fresh in the window seat in the back, Geno in the middle, and Com in the other side. Of course Error was against having Fresh sitting next to the now recovered Geno instead of him but he lost the fight. While the others had their eyes in the road, a talk started between Fresh and Geno. No one really paid attention to them at all, they were just looking at the road happily. But then Geno started "so Fresh anything new home", Fresh looked at his brother and said "nuh not much same as always broski." "really so nothing new happened", Geno reinforced. "You know the usual, breakfast, daycare, such, and error like always", said Fresh. He then scratched his skull and said "one unhinged dude I tell yah"(you could hear a sneeze from Error in the front seat) "what did Error do?", exclaimed Geno with a hint of anger in his voice. "nothing much just the same as always", answered Fresh. Geno knew something more had happened he knew the 'usual' wasn't pleasant and now he was angry at Error and this wasn't the end. They all got home and Geno entered saying "it feels so long." "Yeah I know, come on son", said CQ. "ok", responded Geno. He was now home after so long. He was grateful to Sans his visit had given him back his hopes as he was recovering. It was great he was now back home. The family and friends had I little bound time and such then ink and Com went home. They were back in their good old lifes for now. Then Geno saw something as fresh went upstairs, and like always error was mad that he wouldn't make more off of Geno getting home, but he had talked to Geno quite a few times that day, then back to Geno. He had seen a injury in fresh. More precisely his colar bone as he went up taking off his hoodie. CQ went out and wouldn't be back for long so she said. "take care boys no mishapps, your in charge Geno.*sigh*yes Geno is back now I can let the boys alone together". Fresh was now upstairs and Error & Geno were downstairs. Geno then got back to error and said "so what's new?" Error then responded "Oh you know nothing much." "oh really so can you tell me anything about fresh's colar bone?", said Geno. Error then realized he must have seem it when fresh took his hoodie off, he then answered "uhn well I... he". "what did you do to our brother, Error?", said Geno, ouch now he was angry. Oh boy this was just the start. Geno continued "what did you do?" "nothing", said error, very fast ."nothing, then you can tell what happened to his colar bone please?", said Geno angered."uhm", error knew he couldn't win this, and more he had never seen geno so angry before. So he told about his fight with Fresh and about him saying Geno would be fine, like nothing ever happened. It was much like fresh knew he would make it. Then he heard the day of the fight was the some day sans had showed up in front of him. Geno let out a small gasp, then said "and why did you harm him?" Error said, "he was like nothing happened at all." "well he at least he believed i would be fine error, so why?". Error was now frozen, Geno was yelling at him. "we talked about this before", geno walked away with a sigh. After the fight they made up, but geno was still not very happy about what error did to fresh. It was a new day. Geno`s 8th day after getting out of the hospital being fully recovered. It was morning, and as unusual as it was error woke up before fresh, geno thought this was strange but let it pass until his mom told him to call fresh she also looked surprised fresh was not awake yet most days he was even da 1th awake even before his mom sometimes. It was already late and CQ had to head out. Geno then said "okay mom" and waved her goodbye. He then went up and into fresh's room it was as colorful as always. And indeed fresh was in bed very unusual he then went up to fresh but something was wrong. As he came up to fresh he was still asleep or maybe 'trying' to. "hey fresh", Geno said shaking him. His skull was boiling. "fresh fresh", geno said and shaked him more. Fresh looked up and said in a shaky voice "mornin’ broski." "Are you ok?", asked Geno in concern. "yeah mah rad bro, just I little dizie", said fresh. Fresh got up but fell down again. "are you sure?", asked Geno trying to help him up. "no worries broski", responded fresh. "k", Geno said still very concerned then he asked "need some help?" "Maybe I little here bruh" fresh answered. Geno then helped fresh get on his feet this was very unexpected fresh had never gotten sick ever ever before. They both headed down where error was. "Finally how long did it take for you to wake up", said error.(this is the part where i think you're the one who sleeps the most in this house dude give the boy a fucking break) He saw Geno helping fresh get down then asked "hey what's wrong?" He knew it was strange for fresh to wake up late but when he saw him now he immediatily knew something was wrong. "nothing broski", said fresh with a soft voice eyes barely open. "His skull Is boiling" said Geno. "boiling", error was surprised at this he never ever ever got sick like really at all. Ink did, Geno did, CQ did, Com did, even he did, but not fresh. He became `worried`. Fresh then almost colapsed down if it wasn`t for Geno grabbing him. The two bros gasped and put fresh in the sofa. "what should we do?", asked error "i don`t know let`s call mom", said geno. The boys tried to call their mom but she would not answer work time she often turned off her private phone when in work. They were hoping today wasn't one of the days she did though but after Geno come back from the hospital she turned it off most days. They didn't know what to do at all. (why i love this drama so much XD i'm so sorry Freshy) Their bro was in the sofa looking very spaced out. They then decide to check his temperature but it was normal. So he was sick but not of a cold they thought of the possibility of the thermometere being broken since when they touched him he was still boiling but that was out when they saw where it was made (you'll just stay in the dark for this one~). Something was wrong but they did not know what and they did not like that very much. They were starting to panic but they were able to compose themselfs, fresh was still awake. "do you want some food?", said geno."Kinda..", said fresh. "here", said error giving him a bow. "thanks broski", said fresh, and whispered "so you can be rad uhn." with a smile. "what", asked error confused.Geno had heard and laughed a little. Fresh still had his shades on they change to NOT-HIN while he ate. "k",said error. Fresh`s boiling state came down and now he was.. less boiling."oh", said geno with a gasp."what broski?", asked fresh. He apparently could not feel himself boil. "Your less hot now", said geno.Fresh`s shades were now ??-?? He then fell asleep. Fresh woke up a while later and said with his usual normal happy voice "morning broskis", he then noticed he was in the couch, now looking confused. "It's not morning", said error annoyed. "you okay now fresh?" asked geno after a long sigh. "what do ya mean?", said fresh still confused. His mom was already back and learned about what had happened to fresh she then asked too "you better?". Fresh just repeated more confused "what do ya mean?" He did not remember that morning. "what I mean that you-", said error. Noticing geno stopped him, he backed down. "don't you remember?", asked geno."remember what broski?", asked fresh still confused. "oh great he doesn`t remember good" said error more annoyed. "at least he doesn`t remember you being all worried about him error", said geno. Error blushed softly. Fresh looked at both and in front again he was really confused now. Some days passed, everything was back to normal with a healthy geno on it. There were still the fights, and geno still wondered about what had happened that day with fresh. Mostly it was all great and such. So they went to the day care that day it was da 1th day geno would actually go there. So today ink had come exactly at the same time as the 3 boys.They were now going in. They entered and error would remain close to ink as always or very far from other people, but now closer to geno."come on error", said geno. "Ye come on error", said ink. Fresh looked more free than the others just walking around. While in the daycare error was mostly or close to geno or to ink or the both. After a little geno went up to fresh. "hey fresh what you doing", asked geno."nothin’ much, i'm waitin for someone", said fresh."oh you have a new friend', said geno. "new, nah friend uh- not sure they fall in that cathegory either", exclamed fresh. Then geno saw what his brother meant, it was dat girl or supposily a girl cause he or she was genderless and did not mind being called either. (Teir name was Ri just random character i added for the sake of this story when i didn't know how to move on nothing special just a extra by me), somehow fresh had 'befriend' them or maybe the opposite they had befriended him."Hey freshy", they could hear a faint voice. " Yo Ri" replied fresh, "how yah doing." "Fine and you", asked Ri with a smirk , "hello geno, your back how nice, da more reasonable *whisper*sane brother." The 3 talked until Ri had to go their 'dad' picked them up. "bye, Ju(another extra i ended up adding) is here". After a while their mom came to pick them up. Ink and error wondered were the 2(at least geno) had gone they said they went to talk to a friend which was partly true if you would call them a friend. Them they went home. Few more months had passed peacefully really it was great. It was neutral, less fights still had though, a few times geno would join fresh and talk to Ri it was nice. But sometimes he wouldn`t understand her very well and sometimes there was a something in them that made it strange to be by their side like they weren't a human but they weren't a monster either but in general it was good .Error was away with their mom and it was just fresh and geno in fresh`s room. That day a suprise came to geno`s door well fresh`s door to be exact.Sans was there again he didn`t know how but he was there like last time. "Oh i'm lost again", fresh and geno heard the imeadiatilly recoginized the voice. "what-",fresh was confused as he heard a voice that sounded exactly like his bro. But geno knew it was sans. "hey you again", sans said as he looked through the door.He then noticed where he was that colorful room he could recoginaze it from anywhere. He then saw fresh next to geno.He almost let a tear out of his eye but pushed it back. But he was not able to fool fresh with this. Geno explained to fresh that sans was actually geno from the future. "makes sense since he came from nowhere", said fresh. "hey, mini me", sans said with his most normal voice possible. "hey", answered geno. "Well I didn`t think I would see you- me again." "yeah, same here, life is full of suprises I guess", responded sans. Then the 3 heard another familiar voice, error. "geno where are you, we'll be late." "oh error is calling me, btw what day is today", said sans as he turned to the door. "it's september 27, 2019"(another random date), answered fresh. "one more year uhm",sans said. "what", asked geno."nothing", said sans.He then huged geno out of nowhere and whispered "remember to stay happy ok, and enjoy life". "uhm" geno was confused. Then before sans went, fresh said. "So your from the future, what's future me doing have i became a slacker, leaving you unrad like that, might as well change the future if you became like that." "Huhn, I can never scape from you can i", responded sans, with a soft sad smile "your right you would be pretty unhappy if you saw me now uhm". "uhm I'm not sure, can i feel happy there", said fresh. "well that's still a mystery", said sans winking before leaving the room. The two bros did not know the meaning of those words yet. But they opened to it. "what was that?", asked geno."you asking me broski, cause I have no idea", responded fresh. "yeah I know me neither", said geno."so where were we?", asked fresh. "here, here it is",answered geno pointing at something. They were playing a board game. Then they heard the door opened, right when they finished the game. "it`s ma", said fresh. "yeah let`s go down she might need our help", said geno. "yeah", said fresh following behind geno. "Hey ma, need help?", asked fresh coming down the stairs. CQ was carring 1 bag, than she said "no thanks boys I got it". "ks", said fresh.Than error came running in with ink. "hello ink", said geno. "hey geno", said ink. "you can came in ink", said CQ "I'm makin dinner and goind somewhere with your mom". "my mom?",said ink a bit confused. "yeah you're staying here today" you could hear a "yay" from ink. "the futons are ready so you can sleep when ever you want just make sure to get some rest okay" , said CQ walking towards the kitchen. "kay" said ink now very happy. CQ made dinner and they all ate together. Than after a while CQ and Com went out, leaving some messages before hand " no opening doors to strangers boys", said CQ. They all just said they knew that much and she turned back another time and said "uhn but you can open the door or your friend Ri"(they're minor to the story so don't think too much about them) "uhn Ri is coming didn't hear anything "said Fresh as a answer. " their 'father' asked today, so i said yes since i know him and you know them. "Kay ma", fresh simply replied. Error was not happy with this at all he never got along with them. He then mumbled "no opening for strangers". CQ turned back one more time said "and no locking them out Error", and went to her car. "ugh", error protested revolted. 1 hour had passed since Cq and Com had gone out, the boys then heard a knock in the door. *knock knock* "who's it", asked geno. "it's suppose to be who's there you did it wrong", it was Ri no doubt. Fresh then opened the door and there they were. "hi", said Ri. The boys said "hello", back except error. Well they weren't really waiting him to either. Ri had nothing with her but 6 packets in her hand. "this is for you geno, this is for you fresh, this one for ink, this for Cq, this id for Com, and this is for..." they paused while handing the others their packets and looking at error looked at teh other 3 and then gave it to error. The boys opened the packets and there were sweets inside, each was carefully picked and dedicated to the given person even error's. "Ju insisted i bring this with me", said Ri. "now we won't get hungry and we have desert", said geno. "true", said Ri agreeing. But than ink said "what about YOURS" "uh no problem i can go months without eating or drinking anything", said Ri. "but that's bad for your health", said ink. Ri just stared at him and walked away. Ink couldn't say anything but from that stare he knew they woud be okay. "So why he get you to come here he normally leaves you home alone right", said fresh. "that's true, actually i'm not entirelly sure why",said RI" he just decided this today out of the blue". "i wonder why", said geno thinking. "uh yeah, so what are you guys up to", they agreed and asked. "nothing much just watching movies, drawing, and stuff", said ink.(it was only him drawing though) "is that do what movie and let me see your drawing", said Ri. They put away their packets with sweets and for the rest of the day they talked and watched movies, sometimes ink would even ask Ri about his drawing and error would stay as away from Ri as possible. When CQ and Com got home. The four boys were asleep, and so was Ri or that was what it looked like well they were laid in bed at least. CQ and Com smiled at the kids and went upstairs to sleep Com would sleep in the house too today. After a while, that the two went to sleep you could see a fading light coming from Ri they were floating and were no close to sleeping but they looked fine to the point you woud think "how? why are they not tired? this is obviously unatural" but they were fine and the light from their magic what very small so it wouldn't wake anyone up it looked like it would literelly fade as it grew it grew a little and faded in a contiuous loop. In the morning geno was the 1th one to notice a note in the counter it was from Ri. He read it out load and it said "bye my ride is here you're all asleep so i decided not to wake you up and instead wrote this note, no worries i'll see you all very soon. P.S don't forget your sweets" The others were awake. "great she's finally gone", said error(he used she because of their aparence) "error", said geno a bit angry with the others atitude. Error only looked away. "sweets?", said CQ. "Yeah ma Ri said their 'dad' insisted they bring it", said fresh brushing his teeth. "oh really how nice", said Cq. "they brought one for you too mom", said ink. "they did?" said CoM. "yeah look she got one different for based on the person she's giving", said geno. "wow fancy", said Cq. "ha i bet her dad chose it", said error still looking away. "oh her dad might be a good person but he's not a good chooser and this is great", said CoM taking another piece out of the candy. It was just a day like any other. It was a great day actually. Every thing was good until that happened.. it was the end of the end of the day it was a peaceful night, but error was sleep. The other two boys and Cq were watching a movie it was at the end when it finished fresh was going upstairs. Than suddently error suddently started to glitch really badly apparently he was having a nightmare. He glitched so badly it was starting to make noises, fresh was the 1th to hear them and he could hear it more than it was. Cq and geno were trying to calm error down while fresh would cover his 'ears'. (or the part of the skull a ear would be located) Having error finally calmed down but just before that frsh fell down the stairs and there was a huge thud. Error opened his eyes they were still glitching and he was now crying but he heard fresh fall down the stairs and asked what happened. Geno ran to fresh but all fresh said was "i'm okay just fell from the noise". "noise?", sure geno had heard the glitches but they weren't enough to make a person lose their balance enough to fall down a set of stairs. For some reason error seemed to cry more when he heard fresh's voice, he could kinda see now it was it was enough to know were all the people in the room were located ao he pressed in his mom so fresh and geno hopefully wouldn't be able to see his tears. "you okay bro", asked fresh as he stood up again. All error could do is grumble a "i'm fine". But then geno came closer and asked "did you have a nightmare, what's wrong, you looked like you had a terrble nightmare", said geno. "it's nothing really", said error still a bit in shock. " you sure soon you looked pretty shaken up", said Cq. "nothing", said error again pressing stronger to his mom's chest. "okay if you don't what to talk about it maybe you be better talking about it tomorrow, just tell us when your ready okay", said Cq and she kissed his skull. "k, mom", said error. Dat was the last thing they heard that night. It was the morning after error had his nightmare. Like most days he was the last to wake up, the rest were eating breakfast as it had passes about 10 minutes since fresh annoyinly woke him up. As he woke up he joined teh rest in the table to eat. Then Cq started "so...". Error imediatilly knew what was coming next so he also began. "that nightmare- in that nightmare..". he glitched a little. "error it's okay if you don't want to talk about it", said geno. Then fresh came in "yeah bro". Error shaked a little at his voice than said "no it's okay I'll tell you guys about my nightmare-" Error said stopping a little again " in my nightmare uh- f-free-sh.. he uhn... he died". They were all shocked with the last word error said did he really mean died of dying of die of death. They were all frozen maybe even error a little at having said that word, but somehow fresh looked at least calmer than the rest by a million times. "uh- i died, how..", fresh asked. "uhn- well" error started "i'm not sure what i saw was you in the ground geno grabing you while you turned to dust mom crying and yelling at someone i was just frozen there doing-nothing and you wipped a tear off of geno's face as i came closer than you said uh-" error cried a little "i forgot but it felt like something important". The rest gasped at his explanation of the scene and frsh was like "wha-". Geno remembered what sans had said to him both of the times he came. Some days after the dream(nightmare) it had been mostly forgotten. But it ocassionally came back to geno and it would haunt him for a while. It made him worry, but for now he had ignored it so nobody would be suspicious specially fresh he was quick to catch this type of stuff. But somehow he knew for sure the nightmare error had and what sans said were no considence, he couldn't help but have a feeling that something horrible would happen sooner or later. But he was determinated to stop whatever that was as the words "maybe you'll be able to do what i failed to" stuck in his head. It had passed quite some time since sans second visit and today would be his third. Geno was alone today like the first visit, his mom and fresh had goen to the supermarket, error was at ink's , but for no apperent reason geno had decided to stay home and successfully got permison. He himself didn't know quite why he felt like staying. So that morning while he was alone in his room gues who knocked in his door. So there sans was infront if geno once again. "hey it's been a long time uhn- kid", said sans. "yeah I guess you're right", replied geno. "so what day is today", asked sans. "march 5, 2020", said geno (another random date) "Nice", said sans, "it's a great day". Then geno asked looking up at sans "you recorded in you jornal like me". "well yeah", said sans tthen he whispered "i did take a break after that though". "what are you doing today", asks geno. "uh- today i'mm with my bro", says sans. "wait 'my bro' which one, uh now i which a could see fresh and error in the future. Sans would shake a bit everytime fresh was metioned, then her finally said "im with errir today, in the town festival". "really error is there only him, usually fresh is really excited, but anyways how those error looke like now", asks geno. "same as always pretty grumpy, but i guess better than now for you probably", answers sans. "So what about fresh", asks geno. "fresh he uhn he- well he.. his the tallest as always and he is great at everything nothing changed", lied sans. He was never a good lier. "oh i always knew he would get bigger than us and smarter, i bet error is super jelous", said geno. "yeah he (would be) is", sans laughed a little hiding a tear. "but to tell you the true i can't think of a time we'd go to the town festival without fresh he's usually why error has to go", said geno. "oh yeah it took some time to convince him(it's still why he goes)", says sans "he came when i said fresh wouldn't make it ". "that sounds like error", said geno. The two talked a bit about the future/present, and how things turned out and how they were before.Than they heard error call for sans and he went away. Sometime later error, cq, n` fresh came back, but thanks to sans geno wasn`t bored even a bit.The rest of the day he passed playing games with error, and watching movies with fresh. Sans was right it was a great day. Through the day fresh`s shade seemed to change more than usual or mybe it was just that he talked with fresh more than usual. Specially one of the best days, geno would write in his journal. Today would be another boring day, everyone was out again. Now Geno had nothing to do and he was pretty sure Sans wouldn't appear appear anytime soon. So he was alone with absolutelly nothing to do. So he dicided that since he had nothing to do he would go over his journal. Which left him thinking about the times Sans had come to him, and he knew himself all the times that sans came he had not lied to him much that he noticed at least.But last time he felt like he had missed something so he got together everything he had in sans visits,and he became more worried about fresh as according to his visits.. "it would mean- no". Months had passed and such good life was being spend. I was now September 21, 2020(random date again). Today Cq had something to do, and so did Coun. So today they had to stay in Ri's house. The boy's moms drove them there. When they got there Ri's dad received them. "please come in" the polite man said. (okay maybe not a man- but he was male so eh) He was a skeleton, Ri's monster part (they can turn into a skeleton) "thank you Silver", said Cq and Coun. "not at all there is no harm in adding 4 more kids to this house", said silver. "only you can say that silver", said Coun and she and Cq turned to the door into the car and drove off. "oh well", said Silver then he turned to the stairs and yelled "Ri come down, your friends are here". Ri came down in a second, literally. (they can teleport) "I'm here", says Ri. "Really what did i tell you about teleporting in the house", says Silver. "use onlt when needed, well it was needed cause i didn't want to walk down the stairs", answered Ri. "Where does this laziness come from", exclaims silver. " you know from where it does" says Ri looking at Silver. "Yes sadly I do", says Silver with a sigh."i know you do", says Ri. Silver ignores the last thing Ri said and turns to the 4 boys "I'm sorry, now well my name is Silver, but you can call me Silv or Sil if you want". The boys look to Ri with a face saying `which one sounds better`. Ri mouths `Sil`. After that they began to get accustumeted to the house. And Sil says he'll show them where they would sleep that night. "this way", says Sil. "okay, mr.sil", says the boys. "you can leave you things there", sil said. And the boys just replied "okay". "Neato it's the first time i came to your house, says Fresh looking at Ri. "oh yeah now that you metion it thats true", says Ri.Then sil says "if its with me you can come when ever you want to". "Thank rad skele-tall". "Pfft", as Ri laughed you could kinda feel Sil staring at her after taking a climpse of Fresh. "Oh well he might be a good person but good thing I don't eat because his food is terrible, I mean need to eat but I can taste". "thanks for the warning, broski", says fresh. Then Ri went inside the house more. A little later they came back "where did those cookies come from",asked ink. "they look great",said geno."I was baking them before you guys come on wanna try", Ri replied. "liar, I bet someone made them for you", says Error "Who I don`t have neighboors and we all know it wasn't my dad" They sigh and " i really should continue that research".(the wingdings say 'continue that research') "dont",Sil says as fast as he could."okay okay come down no need to stress out if you boil too much you might melt "(get it uh uh), says Mercy. "oh my sh- no and stop making puns", says sil."then stop giving me a skele-ton of work", says Ri."really", sil gave up."here have a kitten before the dog gets them all", Ri implies giving the cat shaped cookie to the boys" "*internal screech*god", sil goes."There Is no god from where I came and for where i'm going",says Mercy. "DELICIOUS',ink says in a outbust of happiness very sudently surprising Ri. "let me see",says geno and grab a cookie "it`s heaven". "ok", fresh is next "rad flavor".Then error "its good". Everyone looks at error "i told ya so", says Ri. "so what you want to do boys", asks sil."i propose rad movie", says fresh."i humbly agree", says sil takin out some movies then asking "which one?". They played games and such keeping the movie for last. Then they took turns in the bathroom.And error is all like 'no I can't bath in a strangers house', then Ri is like '"'m not a stranger, get your lazy ass up" and forces him to bath. then they see the movie and sleep.Well the boys and sil. It was morning, Cq and Coun came to pick up the boys. They all said bye as sil waved and said come anytime, Ri was like 'ye, just don`t go in my room, okay'. They could fill their sins crawling in their backs as Ri said that.On the car all geno could think about was the day that had just passed, it was a peaceful and great rest of the day too then he though maybe it would stay like that forever just maybe. It was finally a new day. Geno was bored as he heard a knock in the door, he asked "who is it?"."its me geno", he could hear from behind the door it was his friend sugar.He then got out off the couch and opened the door with a big smile"hey sugar"."Hey geno uhm you know that you recovered and me too, and I was wondering we haven't had much time to hang out yet like before so you wanna hang out sometime today, if your free that is",said sugar. "sure sugar just gonna ask my mom", responded geno.After he got permission he spend his day with his good friend sugar it was a great day too. And once again in a little a new dayday came. Today geno did not do much but wait for his brother fresh while watching movies with error, and ink.Today it was fresh who was out the day after geno had been with sugar hangin out that day, fresh and error had been alone in the house.It was a boring day for geno, so he decided to ask error, reinforcing the last two words "so how was yestarday no fighting RIGHT ERROR". "don't worry geno not yestarday since I passed here on time", exclaimed ink. "Is that so, good to know, I gotta say as a brother thank you ink`, says geno. It was a new day again,thought geno.He was now officially bored.So he went to play video game with his brothers, and error would glitchout all the times he lost, i mean he glitched a lot and fresh would just say "yo chill bruh"It was the same as always nothing new. Geno was still worried about teh connections with fresh he had made with his jornal to help it was Error's nightmare, sans visits, he suddently falling ill, or he hearing the glitching to be loud. ut it was okay for NOW. So geno told himself it was just another normal day and he had nothin to worry about at all. Well he was right just another boring day. Next day as normal as ever rather a good day until night. It was now THE night that triggered everything. That started the dissaster to come all started with just a simple word MONSTER. Just a normal night as the boys were walking and a bear monster just came out of nowhere as geno ran to fresh since it was the say the family would go out and buys as many random gifts as they could for no apperent reason at all.(sorry didn't have anything else in mind but this works fine) Geno accidentlt triped in the large monster that appeared suddlently before him. "I'm sorry sir" Geno apologised looking at the far larger monster. "Uh look where your going brat", the monster said shoving away geno. No one seemed very happy with that. The monster was very rude doubt about it he did not seem to care. But error was definitly not happy, he was glitching in anger. ans it seemed to do the same effect in fresh as it did the time he had his nightmare it was a less sad more infuriating glitch. Error took his strings out and pinned the big monster against the wall grabing his soul. The family was shocked. "Error it's okay calm down", said geno. But what he could hear was mored glitched voices all he could say back was "no it;s not okay he thinks he can get out of here unharmed after doing that then he's wrong. This was it he was gonna kill the monster he would be a murder now then pass the rest of life in jail. End- lol just kidding Cq then tried to calm down error but it didn't see to work either. Then fresh came up to error and said "chillax bro". Error looked pissed but now he could here the things around him clearly then geno said "You dont wanna get in trouble just cause a stupid monster did what he wasn`t suppose to, do you". Geno tried again to him calm down he didn`t seem very happy about what the monster did either but he wasn`t about to let his bro go to jail just cause he thought the monsterdeserved it. Then fresh came up, to error. Error only reacted as such "hey who do you think you are", but error stopped when he saw the hint of anger in fresh's face. From his eyes there was a purple lightcoming from underneath his glasses, and it wasn't very welcoming. After the monster was put down he ran and said I'll get you for this you bastards". The was the work UN-RAD in fresh's glasses, and then when they all calmed down they saw this time they didn't get many gifts.After that they all went home. Now time to sleep. Sleep people sleep.The family had a long night so after they got home all they did was get ready to see a movie night special then go directly to sleep. The entire family went to bed, and tommorow would be a long day even longer then they thought it would.It was now officially September 27,2020. Later to be known as The Day of All Disaster. Morning.. the boys were getting ready for the Lishes big carnaval this carnaval only happened once each 5 years and it was finally back, this was fresh's favorite carnaval but also his- it was going all well until about noon, and error started nagging about having to go to the carnaval. "come'on it will be rad broski", said fresh trying to pull error. But he refused to give in "no i won't" said error inrritated, "why do we even have to come to this stupid carnaval anyways" But in the end they got him to go. And there waited a suprise for the family. Kiss good-bye to tommorow. One word MONSTER. It was the huge monster they inccontered that was almost killed by error if it wasn't for fresh. "brats", said the big monster.But he got interrupted by fresh "pf didn't your mother teach you manner bro cause yu spitting on me.(hoho YO GET DUNKED ON he deserved that) The monster definetly did not take this well, and he pinned fresh against the wall. 'You cocky brat, don't think you'll get out of here this time" "uh what's wrong mister i can't seem to hear you who was the one that left crying yesterday", said fresh he seemed pissed. He was Threating a person that fresh. The family was suprised by fresh's words.Words that might have not seem strange if they were error'sbut fresh he seemed upset and it looked like he was ready to kill anytime.

As the monster continued to pin him against the wall he scaped rather easily actually it seemed like he had done it a dozen of times before.He reacted in his own and put the big monster away from him and his family with that it was clear that fresh was stronger than the big monster.But the monster was not very happy he tried to fight fresh and attacked him.The family gasped and Cq went to call the police as fast as she could.Fresh seemed rather calm but you could see he was very unpleased with the monster`s unradness.He really wasn`t the type to tolarate people like that, he took his shades off to reveal his bland and souless eyes which were now lighten up with a purple light around them.Fresh looked like a image of a rainbow fire. Yoi really wouldn`t want to be that monster right now.The monster panicked after seeing fresh`s eyes as he looked just ready to kill him.The monster acted without thinking and accicidenly hit fresh right in his soul as Cq come back with the police.The monster noticing his mistake fell in the ground away from the family."fresh, fresh",said geno as he grabed fresh"uhm- bro",said fresh.Cq and error were stone.Then error came back to his senses and said"dont worry fresh we`ll call the ambulance", he was glitching a bit and you could almost see a real tear falling from his eye but as if it went back in. But it was too late fresh was becaming dust. "Wait no, don't go fresh", geno said now cryin, and he quickily pulled fresh`s shirt up to see there a very small yet delicate and almost invisible soul it was like it was there just to keep i'm alive, and did not feel much or do anything more then support his physical form but it was fading.It was a bright purple soul but it was now shattered into what seemed like 1 million pieces.Cq had now located the monster and started yelling at him the police had to keep her away from the man before she went to jail together with him.It was a tragedy, than Coun and ink came to check because the family was late and all the noise that was going on there.Coun trying to stop Cq from the monster, and ink error.But at this point I had say he deserves it and hard.Lik fuck you man, go die in a hole. Cq was crying and yellin at the monster, Geno was grabbing Fresh and holdin him up, and Error was frozen not being able to do anything at all, he came closer to Fresh, Fresh wiped away a tear away from Geno`s face and said "whats wrong mah bros, you why are you so sad unrad facial expresion, I even thought ypu were so rad that day Error you cant just stop now, don`t lose your smile 'kays*cough*".It was like they were watching error's nightmare only now it was for real, fresh wouldn`t be there the next morning standin in front of them, saying its 'chill bruh'.Fresh had turned to dust."i'm sorry it was my fault if I didn't bring his attention this would have never have happened", said error standing in front of the pile where now rested Fresh's dust. It was the day of the nightmare. Fresh had died the family was broken but it was fresh who died he sure wouldn`t be pleased if he saw his family now.So they were able to move on and have good lives. But they would never forget FRESH. In geno's journal September 27,2020 was blank with only the word NIGHTMARE on it.For a few years geno had stopped to write in his journal but after the first Lishes carnival since fresh had died, the day he had died he began to write again.As the years passed he was able to put the puzzles together about sans now every thing made sense and soon he would see himself "you'll be better than ok", but he added something the others were never able to"save him save him please and remember the day September 21,2020 the best day of ur life, but save him pay attention and don't bumb in the big MONSTER".It was true everything about this was true he just hoped this little geno would remember. Later he came back to his journal and without erasing the big nightmare he wrote the details of the day, and cried as he saw his good life. His real encoragement was not sans it was fresh, it had been since day one.

#fanfic #1th #momma cq #sorry for any mistakes #or typos

I know its inevitable that you're going to respond to this in a defensive way because im pretty sure everyone would. But i just think SOMETIMES the way you answer questions is kind of rude. and i get why because like you get asked the same question over and over again, or like its an "annoying" question. So maybe just dont reply to asks that irritate you... because its not like its a hate ask. They are genuine questions sent in by people who genuinely love you so sometimes that response hurts..

I really do want to know why people think my answers are either rude or arrogant or all the other things I keep being called, because it honestly hurts my feelings getting those words thrown at my face….

The only thing I can thing about is the “I’ve answered this before” but this is simply a point to the fact that people can find more answers like these under my “shawn talk” because if I answer the question too short, I’m getting thrown at my face once again, that I’m arrogant or whatever. Therefore I’m guiding people to know, that if they want a deeper answer than what I’ve given them, it is possible to find more likes these, because I’ve answered things like that as well.

I feel kind of offended getting those words thrown at me(and I get them more than the once I respond too) because how can you judge me from knowing me through a screen? I am literally trying to get through everyone’s questions so no one feels left out or overlooked or anything like that and it doesn’t really matter the hell I do, there’s always something I’m doing wrong……