30 Theme OTP Challenge - Twelve: Making Out
Number 12 and the one I really want some feedback on. :/
Writing make out scenes, or hot-heavy scenes have NEVER EVER been my forte. I try and practice and get better at them, but its always been a difficult area for me, so I post hoping for feedback, and get none. Sad times.
Anyway.
Hunter and Piper making out. <3
His mouth swallowed the groan that escaped involuntarily from her mouth. He smirked against her lips, pushing his hand through her hair and tugging back a little, forcing the blonde to tilt her head back further and allow him to take further advantage of her state.
Piper's hands and fingers moved against his t-shirt, spread against the wide expanse of his back. All she could do from her position beneath him was that, shift her hands across him, and slightly move her torso and legs.
They were intertwined, their legs knit together, arms the same, causing difficulty if either of them tried to move.
Somewhere in the back of his mind, Hunter remembered they had something to do, something that they had been doing before they found themselves interlocked; yet for the life of him, he couldn't recall exactly what it had been.
It could not have been especially important.
Piper's neatly made bed had become swiftly unmade as soon as the two of them had hit it. The door was closed and locked, preventing Digimon and her brother from making uninvited entrances. They always locked the doors now. It was more of a safety precaution that anything else, and something they did out of habit.
"Too... hot..." Piper's voice was a rasping sound, made in between heated kisses. Hunter could feel her tugging at his shirt, pushing the fabric up his back and chest so it was practically bunched beneath his armpits.
Hunter laughed a little, bending his head to place his mouth beside Piper's ear. "Don't be so grabby." He ordered, his voice hoarse. Piper's whole body seemed to tremble beneath him as he bit, hard, on the cuff of her ear.
"You're one to talk." Piper retorted, raising an eyebrow, and averting her gaze as Hunter lifted his head away, supporting himself on his forearms.
He enjoyed looking at her, seeing her like this.
With pink cheeks, and red, moist lips, kiss swollen and slightly bruised. Her hair mussed, untidy and splayed around her face and neck. It was times like this where he noticed things about Piper he sometimes forgot, like how her skin flushed in certain places when she was too hot. How she had a light smattering of freckles across her nose and forehead which only ever appeared when she tanned. That when she was shadowed, like she was now, that her eyes seemed to turn a deep, stormy blue. A vast comparison to their usual brightness.
"What?" She asked, tilting her head to one side on the pillow. She drew her fingers in shapes across the bare flesh of his back, causing his muscles to twitch and gooseflesh to rise as she tickled him.
"Just looking at you." Hunter admitted, smiling. He let out a short breath of laughter. "Sometimes I forget how sexy you can be."
As he expected, Piper rolled her eyes. "Shut up." Without warning, she had fisted the front of his shirt, and had pulled him towards her. Her lips on his, demanding and insistent.
Hunter's stomach squirmed pleasurably to her ministrations, and he replied with gusto, dragging his hands down the length of her torso to dig into the flesh of her side and thigh. Grazing his lips and teeth against her cheek and chin until he reached her neck where he could bite a touch harder, and hear the delicious hisses of pain and enjoyment all mixed into one.
Her finger nails scratched against his back, grazing the flesh and pulling the fabric of his shirt further. He felt her hands, as if they were everywhere, up in his hair, drawing his head back towards her. Piper claiming his mouth once again. Her bare feet pawed at his denim three-quarter lengths. The skin of her legs rubbed against that of his body, unabated by clothing due to the shorts she had chosen to wear.
He pulled away from a moment and slipped the clothing off over his head, discarding it to the floor blindly.
Piper was up on her knees in what might have been a moment, her weight against him and arms around his shoulders keeping their bodies close together.
She took his lower lip into her mouth and bit down lightly with her teeth. Hunter grinned to himself as he adjusted his body to be more comfortable. When they had first started seeing one another, Piper had been shy, demure and retiring, even in private. Actions such as biting his lip or being so bold as the kiss him first were unheard of...
Yet now... it was as if she was a totally different person sometimes.
Piper's fingers traced across Hunter's chest, making his muscles twitch and ripple beneath her nails. She drew shapes slowly, dragging her fingers with enough pressure to make it feel amazing, and send trembles across Hunter's whole body.
"Pipes..." Hunter swallowed air, his head falling back. Piper sucked on the racing pulse point in his neck, nipping at his skin with the front teeth. Hunter fisted the back of her tank top with one hand, and the messy covers with the other.
She kissed her way up the column of his neck, stopping at his ear lobe and taking that into her mouth to suckle. Hunter shuddered once more, yanking unceremoniously at Piper's shirt.
"Off." Hunter ordered, rasping. "Your shirt. Now." He didn't wait for a response. Piper moved away quickly and Hunter yanked the shirt off over her head, letting it fall to the floor.
"Don't be so grabby." Piper remarked playfully, repeating his earlier statement. "I like that shirt."
"I like it a lot more on the floor." Hunter replied, barely giving the fabric a second glance. He drank in the sight of the blonde opposite him. Her pale skin reddened in places from the heat between them and from the pressure he had applied on her soft flesh. The bra she wore was a turquoise lacy one with white accents. One of the straps had slipped from her shoulder and sat tantalising at her mid-bicep, just asking to be pulled down.
Hunter gave her no time to make a response to his comment. Using his superior height and weight, he grabbed Piper's hands and shoved her against the headboard.
Piper gave a small shout of pain, the sound of her head smacking the wood reaching Hunter's ears.
"SHIT!" Hunter released her wrists. Piper immediately rubbed the back of her head, wincing. "Sorry! Shitshitshit..."
"Its fine, its fine..." Piper murmured.
"Sorry." Apologised Hunter. "I didn't mean to..." He tilted his head to one side, giving Piper a weak smile.
"I'm fine..." Piper replied, lifting her hand away from her head. She checked her palm and then showed Hunter. "See, no blood. Just a few missing brain cells."
Hunter gave a small, forced laugh, "guess I completely ruined the mood with that stunt." He huffed.
Piper shook her head, kissed his cheek and the corner of his mouth. "Don't be silly. It's just a bump on the head..." She leaned back against the wall, turning her head coquettishly to one side and lifting her arms above her head. "How's this?"
A smile drew across Hunter's mouth as he moved smoothly towards her. "Mhm... I love you..." He breathed, easily placing his lips against hers. He grasped her hands with his own, squeezing her fingers with his. Piper's fingers curled down against the backs of his hands, she giggled softly against him.
Within moments, Hunter was on the move once more, regaining their previous passion with ease, dragging the tip of his tongue across Piper's neck, nuzzling against the cleft of her bosom and biting there, enough to leave light teeth marks.
He held Piper's hands in one of his, clutching her wrists, keeping them together. Piper breathed out harshly, her fingers wriggling in an attempt to get free, but Hunter had his grip and had no intentions of letting go.
His moved passed her breasts, stroking down her flat stomach with his free hand and following that with his mouth, leaving slow, hot kisses against her skin. He glanced up to Piper's face, saw her head dipped back a little, her mouth open slightly where her tongue licked against her lip.
His fingers ghosted against the button on her shorts, against the zipper and down, lower until Hunter's free hand was stroking against the care skin of her thigh.
Piper's legs open without any effort on Hunter's behalf, and he drew his thumb and fingers across her flesh.
He released Piper's hands and managed to shift across the covers, lightly stroking his hands along her inner thighs, tickling the sensitive areas with his own fingers. Piper slid against the wall until she was lying down flat, on her side though her hips faced up towards the ceiling.
Continuing his ministrations against her legs, Hunter nestled over Piper's belly, leaving trails of light, open-mouthed kisses against her skin. The blonde's fingers ran through his hair easily, rubbing his scalp.
He delved lower. Bypassing Piper's shorts once more, he nuzzled the skin of her thigh, tightening his hold a little on her leg. It quivered in his grip. Hunter saw the young woman looking at him, her eyes curious. He held her eyes as he bit down on his skin, biting a small piece sharply with his teeth.
The hiss that leapt from Piper's throat was a little alarming at first, until he heard the satisfied sigh come after it, and her fingers rubbing against his head. He bit again, a different area this time, and the relaxing motions on his head became more insistent.
Another bite, and Piper jerked unexpectedly.
"Piper?"
The voice through the door caught Hunter aware. His head whirled to face the door, until he remembered Piper had locked it. She was sat up straight, looking like a deer caught in headlights.
"Dad?"
Hunter's eyes widened. Neither of Piper's parents were due back for at least three weeks!
"What are you doing back?" Asked Piper. Her cheeks were bright red, though from the panic of almost getting caught or from the enjoyment of the previous seconds, it wasn't clear. She ran her hands through her hair, tidying it off her face, and gave Hunter an apologetic smile.
"One of my clients cancelled on me, changed their mind on the piece they were looking at. I had a few days so I thought I would come home!" The door handle rattled as Andrew tried it. "The door's lock, sweetie."
"Yeah... Dad." Piper bit her lip, "I... uhm..." she glanced around the room to try and think of an excuse. "I... I'm naked!"
Hunter covered his mouth to stop from laughing. Piper threw a pillow at him.
"Oh... kay." Andrew replied slowly through the door. "Have you had a shower?"
"Yes! I am naked because I just had a shower!" Piper replied, "that makes sense!"
"The bathroom is dry though." Andrew said, "did you use the bathroom in mine and your mother's room? That was dry too."
"Oh." Piper rubbed her face. "Uhm..."
"What's going on Piper?" Andrew tried the door again. "Have you brought something home from the clinic you don't want me to know about?"
Hunter laughed again.
"Dad, Hunter is in here with me." Piper told him bluntly, staring at the door.
There was silence from the other side for moments that passed with intense slowness. "Right... I see." Andrew coughed, clearly uncomfortable by the knowledge that his youngest child and only daughter was in her locked room with her boyfriend. "Okay... well. Ask if he would like to you us for dinner this evening. I'll uh... yes." He coughed once more, "right."
Hunter and Piper listened silently for a few seconds to hear Andrew's footsteps departing hurriedly down the hallway to the stairs. Once they could no longer hear him, Piper fell back onto her bed, pulling a pillow over her face and Hunter let out a bark of laughter, flopping down beside her on his front.
"Your dad..."
"Oh my GOD!" Piper groaned, muffled by the pillow. "That is so humiliating!"
"Naked? Why didn't you just say you'd woken up from a nap, or something?" Hunter teased.
Removing the pillow, Piper glared at him, "I couldn't think of anything! Not like you were any help!"
"Guilty." Hunter admitted cheerfully. He rolled onto his back, "your dad sure has the worst timing... way to spoil the mood."
Sidling across the sheets, Piper curled up against Hunter's side. "Sorry..."
"You weren't to know." Hunter replied, smiling. He kissed her hair. "How long should we wait before going down?"
"Oh, I am never leaving my room again." Piper advised him, burying her face against his skin. She groaned quietly, "Oh God, I bet he'll tell mom..."










