Here’s a little Easter gift for anyone who enjoys my writing!
No, it’s not my PLL movie script (although that is still coming along nicely!) but the first of a new project I’m starting. There are quite a few scenes from PLL that I thought were handled poorly or could have been better. So I figured why not do some rewriting?
This first one is a rewrite of the scene between Spencer and Alison in 6x03, “Songs of Experience,” which can be viewed here. I always thought that Ali came across as just so incredibly selfish here, first refusing to help her friends find out about Charles and then whining about how no one likes her to the girl who just spent three weeks trapped in an underground torture chamber. It really set her redemption back for me. So I got to thinking, how could I write this scene so that it makes Alison into the actual friend we were supposed to see her as? And here’s what I came up with.
Hopefully I found all of the typos - I hope you enjoy! I’m going to start writing more of these as I continue my movie script, and I would love ideas for scenes that you guys would like me to do. If there’s a scene or moment that you think could’ve been written differently, message me and let me know! I’d love suggestions!