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Hi everone! I am getting ready for my first publishing :) I would like to discuss some points and get some criticism. I am not native English speaker but ironically enough I ended up writing in English. Down below you will find my synopsis, I would like to know if it is interesting? ______________________________________________ • Synopsis The year 2080, two generations passed since the European Union collapsed after the events of WW3. Nion, a citizen of the lands of Aleksithimia, is the sole person who was allowed to keep her emotions from being taken away by the new regime of the land. Assigned as the special unit at the Eastern border control, she became a lone-wolf, eliminating anyone who dared to trespass through the closed borders illegally. Haunted by the deaths of the ones she’s slain, time passes on. After years of living and serving for the Utopian City that has been constructed by the prosper Aleksithimia, one of four rulers of the New World; Suffocating as an emotionless persona, fraught with distress that she became a tool rather than a human being. Alone in the perfectly unperfect universe, Nion has begun her long journey to discover the truth about the world she is living in, and most importantly, her true self that has been erased a long time ago… ___________________________________________ #visualnovel #amateurwriter #youngwriters #novel #scifinovel #iwrite #futurewriter #novel #novelsynopsis #amateurnovelist #newnovel #newbook #postapocalyptic #postapocalypticnovel #dive https://www.instagram.com/p/BtG7LL7AtZf/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=1wdcqrbiunl0x

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The Sixth Judgement • Prologue part four The current story is taking place after the great war of the ”Slagveld” (the year 2070 – 2073). This was the war for what remained of the Atlantic ocean. Before the elders’ passed away, they were assigned specific roles within their religions to protect their history and culture for the future generations. The end of the war of the ”Slagveld” resulted in the loss of many people. Four prodigies (or the most talented individuals) were assigned by the last surviving elders. People called them ”Prospers”. The continent was divided into 5 regions, and the Prospers were given land ownership of a respective region: Land of Aleksithimia (Grand Central – European continent), Land of Elpida (Eurasia), Land of Slagveld (African continent), Land of Zenit (Nordic countries) and Land of Nekros (The first area that has been affected by the Gan virus, appears to be inhabited). After the election, each Prosper applied their own culture and religion to their land. The agreement of peace had finally begun. [the Year 2083] Four prospers could have made a pact of the permanent cease-fire, however, internal problems of acceptance between the inner population and conflicts within lands were never concluded. Remaining territories were still under anarchy rules which constantly led to conflicts between native and previously migrated inhabitants. Due to the lack of natural resources, both parties were struggling to maintain a healthy and sane balance; Depending on regions, plantation of resources and hunting were rarely possible without specific constructions and gears; This was the main cause of famine in rural areas. __________________________ #youngwriters #postapocalypticnovel #novel #scifinovel #freereed #freebook #freenovel #epicnovel #epicbooks #litfict #fiction #bookclub #bookgram #iwrite #iwritenovels https://www.instagram.com/p/BtI7WzOFqL7/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=12wv3ewtdbn6u

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The Sixth Judgement • Prologue part three [the Year 2042] There was an attempt to transplant immune blood cells from immune new-borns to other people, hoping that these antibodies would recognize the anti-Gan cells and reconstruct on their own. Sadly, participants in this experimental study would suffer heart attacks and most often die. This was because both DNA structures were not able to communicate with one another, and the subjects’ bodies had constant conflicts of Leucocytes (White blood cells). After a few years, the project was abandoned. In the meantime, the virus had perfectly established itself in the air, and scientists were able to create effective water filtering systems. This lead to worldwide conflicts for remaining water resources. The Atlantic ocean was soon the last existing ocean on earth. [the Year 2069] Three-quarters of water resources on planet earth had been exhausted. Due to rising water prices and difficulty in accessing clean water (due to the heavy protection of water resources in high-level societies) resistance groups started forming. These groups would ravage water sites. The whole planet had become a war zone, filled with anxious and desperate people. Each side of the remaining groups was attacking one another in an attempt to claim clean water sources for themselves. This lead to a dramatic global temperature increase and cold areas became three to four times warmer than in recorded history. This resulted in massive waves of refugees who had to leave their homelands due to the fact that it was impossible to survive in their current conditions. They decided to leave to find a new place to establish themselves. Sadly, due to all the existing global stress, they were not accepted anywhere. These unusual conditions and the growing refugee crisis sparked hatred and rejection from those who owned water sources. ___________________________ #youngwriters #postapocalypticnovel #amateurwriter #fiction #ebook #freebook #novel #novelists #bookclub #bookinstagram #epicreads #litfic https://www.instagram.com/p/BtI6g91F3HX/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=1h2qort5cwiaf

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The Sixth Judgement Prologue part two •[the Year 2040] Leading scientists around the world began working together to produce a cure. Water consumption had increased by a factor of 2 thousand when compared to the late 1900s. In an attempt to produce clean water from previously unused sources, such as oceans and lakes, organizations such as the United Nations constructed various non-consumable water filters. This excessive water treatment process was unsuccessful, as scientists didn’t have enough time to validate the microbial reaction the water would have to the antibiotics meant to filter it to make it safe for human consumption. Chemical substitutes used for the dirty water meant that those who were already infected with the virus suffered even more. Hospitals soon reached maximum capacity, and as follows, the low and middle class could not afford to buy water to ease their pain. The human population began fading out. A study showed that those who were exposed to the Gan virus past middle age were unlikely to withstand and endure the pain when compared to the young population (between birth and 5 years of age). The scientists conducting the study explained this by suggesting that the younger generation had developed an immunity to the virus due to self-developed antibodies that reconstructed their DNA so that the Gan virus does not harm the host. The new immune system brought up previously undiscovered body conditions such as stronger pain tolerance, the general improvement of physical aptitudes, water thrust resistance, faster climate adaptation, and slower cell aging. ___________________________ #youngwriters #postapocalypticnovel #amateurwriter #scifinovel #epicreads #postapocalypticnovel #ebook #fiction #fictionbooks #climatechange #bookinstagram https://www.instagram.com/p/BtI4wEZFHY6/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=1m3veil2dxk6i