Peer Feedback
I got some peer feedback saying I should explore a different typeface for my context text because it was to similar - hard to know which one to read (hierarchy not very good), look deeper into meaning of typeface for smaller type - what is it meant to represent ??
I made the text smaller + added some text at the top from older posters in attempt to make it more balanced - then tried to find a serif typeface and ended up using adobe KIS the typeface that I used in last poster exploration before this as it represented Victoria Park very.
Here is the poster before and after type adjustments
Looking at them next to each other - I think the new typeface looks better? not sure about the text at the top maybe I need to make it bigger? also the UP is throwing me off a little bit like im wondering if its okay to leaver it cause I decently like it but I just wonder if it unbalances the poster to much?
