Finally sat down to read the new Creator yesterday. I started it with the first version and references(?) to the twist. Can't judge yet, but I like the atmosphere of the new version. Is there any reason to completely rewrite the plot or? This is not a complaint, just interest. Hope I don't come as rude..
Yeah, I just thought the older version was cringe. Way too-fast paced, like you never knew why this character felt this way other than just cause, namely with the yanderes. This time, I really want to take my time developing the yanderes. And by take my time, I really mean take my time.
This extra time will also allow me to give some character development to the mc too, not just the yanderes, and perhaps other characters.
Right now, here's the current plan: the story will be split into four, maybe five parts if I need extra time and pages to end it.
Part one will be from chapter one to chapter twelve, and will set up the story, briefly give readers enough basic information for how magic works, what mc's normal life looks like, and introduces some important characters.
Part two (every part after one will likely be twelve to fifteen chapters, maybe more? I have to see), will be about creation one. I do not want this story to be the type where the yandere gets attached for some ridiculous reason, or no reason at all, so it will take time for not just him but all others to get to that obsessive dangerous stage aka act like a yandere. So part two will encompass creation one, their development, goals, background, and his relationship with the mc. Each part will also be represented by some sort of growth or development for the mc. In this case, part two will showcase a physical development in the mc.
Part three will center around mc changing emotionally/internally, along with the development of the second creation.
Part three will center around mc changing in one final way, and comes with the development of a third creation.