I just spent 45 means AGONIZING over a recommendation of how to rephrase this sentence with dialogue in it. 45 MINUTES. And that’s me being an editor. As in, this is NOT my work. I’m not coming up with the original idea, and yet, I want this to be the best it can be (and I don’t want to offend the author in any way). It’s ridiculous, but worth it in the end. Hopefully.










