Under the cut is a full review for @readitandweeprp
Please keep in mind that everything written is my own personal opinion and regardless of what I think you should go with what you’re happy with. All criticism given is not intended to offend, it is constructive. Feel free to message me if you need more help or if you’d like me to delete this review
Url and Icon
I like the url, it gives me an incline to those who haven’t seen the film exactly what the roleplay is about and it also tells fans of the film that read it and weep is exactly what it’s about. I also like your icon but it is rather pale and might not be as clear to people. I feel as though maybe putting a splash of color in it might help? Maybe your role plays name in a light but really visible pink or a color to go with your themes color scheme?
Theme
I love your theme, I love themes with side bars. I also love your color scheme, I love how beautifully the grey and pink go together. It’s easy to navigate and I think it’s a great theme for your roleplay.
Navigation
You’re navigation page has everything I’d expect to see in a role play. It’s easy to read and you’ve laid it out nicely.
side plot.
You’ve made it even clear that read it and weep is based off of the film. I do however think for those who haven’t seen it you could maybe add a little something else? I think the first four sentences of your main plot could work great for the side bar plot.
Main plot
I love your plot, I think it’s an interesting plot. I love how light hearted it is and I can tell a plot like this will cause plenty of drama and give students plenty to talk about. I think your plot is well written, it’s easy to read and it’s not complicated to understand what it’s about.
Rules
I think your rules are perfect, they’re clear and understandable. I love how you’ve also made them pretty simple and not written big paragraphs explaining your rule. It’s just simple and explains perfectly without going into so much detail like some roleplays do, if that makes sense? I also think you’ve got the right rules down.
Main Graphics
I think your graphics are beautiful but I’m not sure about the Polaroids, I’m just not sure how they go with the plot? I think maybe an open journal with a pen or something similar would look great and I think it’d go with the plot nicely.
Character Graphics
I love your character graphics, they’re simple and neat. They’re easy on the eyes and I think they’re stunning.
Biographies.
I love your skeletons, they give the role player so much freedom but they also give the roleplayer ideas on how to write this character. Your suggested face claims are very diverse which is always great to see in a roleplay. I also love how sexuality and gender is up to player.
Application
I’ve never seen numbers used instead of titles before, it’s quite refreshing and different. I like it. I also love the head canon section, that way the person applying can delve more into their character before playing character out and I think it’s great because sometimes you pick up a character without really delving into character development and can then quite easily loose muse for that character so I think they head canons are a great idea. I’m not sure about five on your application? What if the person applying doesn’t have any links, most people do but what if someone doesn’t?
Overall
I see you’ve put a lot of dedication and time into this role play. It’s very well thought out and you seem like a hard-working and dedicated admin. I think those who haven’t seen the film will love it and for those who haven’t I also think they’ll love it. It adds an interesting dynamic to your usual high school role play. This is something I would definitely consider joining and I wish you all the best.
