#redstringrpg

[narryperrie]

Hello! Could we please have any opinion, it would mean a lot! :)

Of course, babe! The color scheme, ugh, I’m in love. The graphics are gorgeous, and honestly, I love that gradient so much. Ah, it’s set close to Chicago! Sounds close to where I live, I wonder if I could find it. I joke, I joke. I love the idea of the red string of fate, it’s one of my favorite concepts, and I think trying to make it into an RP is interesting. Looks like you really need a few more apps for males, the females are absolutely dominating. Otherwise, I think the plot is wonderfully written, and at first I thought it was going to be a set-ship kind of RP, but I’m very pleased to see that it’s not. This isn’t exactly my kind of RP since the romantic stuff isn’t so much my thing, but I’m sure a lot of people would really be interested in this kind of thing. I don’t have too much to say about anything else, and you’ll get a rec from me! Good luck, and I hope you get all the apps you need!

[emiliaofrps]

Could we pretty please have an opinion? :)

Sure you can boo! Your theme is cute but I'm not sure I like the colour, I think it's too dark especially given how light your icon is. I was expecting something soft. I like the plot though but after reading it I'm just a bit curious about if you'll be sticking to heterosexual relationships or varying it? Also how are you going to chose the connections if it's an OC rp? Just a few things I was wondering about that might be good to explain somewhere. 

[slayingtalks]

Hello could we pretty please get an opinion? Thanks so much! :D

Absolutely!  The theme instantly caught my attention and from that alone the rp seems like something cute that I want to check out.  The red color scheme is a little much to look at, and I probably would suggest something a little lighter, but it certainly doesn't look bad.  I don't like the way the navi was put together at all.  It just looks quickly put together and even a little lazy.  The plot is a little lacking.  It sounds cute, but it could use some sort of a twist just to make things more interesting.  Right now it kind of just seems like it doesn't have much of a plot, just some cute story about the red string of fate.  All the same I think this has potential and could be cute, so even though I'm not going to rec this I wish you the best of luck with this rp.

[losersrph-blog]

Could we have a first look review please?? :)

Of course, cutie! Please look under the read more for your review.

URL: 

I really like your url. It’s straight to the point and that’s a good thing. I also feel like it draws in people because they would want to know what the hell the red string is.

ICON: 

I like it a lot. I like the initials for the roleplay there. The only thing I’m iffy about is the image you chose. To me, it’s very bleak and I can’t really tell what it is if I looked hard at it. That might just be me because I have very bad vision.

PLOT:

I absolutely love you. One of my favorite things in the world is the red string between two soul mates. I’m so glad you chose that. I actually really like your plot. The whole story about Ryan is very cute. I wish you could elaborate more on what’s going on with the present townspeople. Are the roleplayers going to choose their soulmates or are you going to randomly select them? I think that something needs to picked out so it’s not all unorganized with people choosing and there are people left without a soulmate. The plot is also written pretty well.

THEME: 

Red. That is a whole lot of red. I feel like it’s way too much red for my liking. I get that it’s supposed to be red because of ‘red string’ but maybe tone it down a little bit. For your sidebar, I really don’t understand the point of having Shailene there. Is Shailene the girl from the plot? If she isn’t, I feel like you should change your sidebar to something more relevant to the plot.

APPLICATION: 

Is this like a semi-appless roleplay or something? It’s very simple. I, personally, don’t like overly complex applications. Overall, it’s pretty straight to the point. I also like that you give people a choice if they are going to be a non-believer or a believer.

RATING:

I give your roleplay an A-

I really like a like a lot of the qualities you have in this roleplay. All you need to change is a couple of things here and there.  

I wish you lots of luck on your roleplay!