Hey sweetheart! May we have an opinion, please? Thank you very much!
Your theme is fairly easy to navigate, though I think the colors on your blog don’t exactly mesh very well. They’re not exactly blinding, but they might not be the best combination either. The yellow is a little too light on the white and is a little hard to read. And although it has a beachy feel to it, maybe try a couple of the gradients from this pack and see which one works best with your graphics? I thought of linking you to that one because based on your graphics, it seems like the location of this RP is somewhere by the sea. Am I right about that, though? It doesn’t exactly say in your plot. But before I move on to your plot, I’d just like to say that the font of your banners is very cute!
Anyway, the plot itself is short, but well written and structured nicely. I like the repetition at the beginning—it kinda gives an emphasis on the plot. The ending is nice too, asking a question like that. I’ve always liked those questions because it draws people in to the roleplay and makes them curious about the roleplay. However, I would advice you to put up some sort of warning before the plot, because running away might be a serious issue for some people out there.
Your rules are concise, but they cover the major things that should be covered in a roleplay’s rule. But I’d like to point out that if someone blacklists a word—let’s use “anxiety” as an example—on Tumblr Savior, then if someone tags “tw: anxiety”, it will not be blacklisted. If the word comes first, though (eg. anxiety tw), then it will be blacklisted by Tumblr Savior, and I would recommend you to ask your players to tag such as: anxiety tw, depression tw, etc.
Considering that this is an OC RP, I can’t really comment on any characters. But I could make a comment on the most wanted list, and while it’s cool that you’ve included several POCs, adding more couldn’t hurt. There are hardly any Asian POCs on your list of most wanted face claims for both males and females, and there are a lot of gorgeous people out there! Moving on to the application, I think it’d be beneficial for you to include a section in which the applicant is asked to describe their character a little. After all, you don’t want to have all the same type of characters. On top of that, you don’t require an IC sample, so it’d be a good idea to get a grasp on people’s OC through short descriptions. They don’t have to write a bio, but perhaps just bullet points about background, personality, or even like psychology stuff such as Myers-Briggs type, Temperament, Hogwarts house, etc.
As admins, I think you guys seem friendly. However, roleplay admins also should seem professional, and maybe you could refrain from making posts like this, as they make you seem a little unprofessional. Remember, it’s important for admins to have a balance between approachable and authoritative, and if they don’t get that professional vibe, then some of your members might not take you seriously.
In conclusion, you’ve got a pretty good base idea here, but there are also some things that you might want to look back on and revise. Your roleplay has potential, and I wish you two the very best of luck with running it. If you ever need any more help, please don’t hesitate to drop another ask in my inbox!