segundart replied to your post @segundart asked this, and I was mid response when...
God, this is REALLY good, I love these kinds of behind the scenes, it’s a possibility to see the situation entirely from another point of view, it’s incredible
Yeee! And considering all the chapters in question were from Hanzo’s perspective, and already written before realising the true cause of Jesse’s phantom pain, I weaved in little hints of Jesse’s discomfort instead. I really wanted to change chapter fourteen and fifteen but it just didn’t work. I then tried working it in later, but it felt forced, so I just let it be with that little note at the end of fifteen, and even that little note at the end of the fic, too.