Replies to the revised prologue and chapter 1 under the cut.
@nectar-cellar Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Also:
@simstate These are some of the most wonderful comments I've ever gotten on any of my work. I love liminal stuff and that was definitely a big aesthetic inspiration, so I'm thrilled! Thank you so much, simstate!
@tiasolo Thank you so much! I've begun Chapter 2, hopefully it won't take as unreasonably long as Chapter 1 did.
@simplystuff Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
@potentialfate-sims Ahh, sorry, I didn't realize there was anything in there that could cause a jump scare. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
@sofy-tofy mfw ROR Queen Sofy reads and likes my story:
@bayoubashsims You are storytelling goals, so you have no idea how much it thrills me that you liked it!
@letomills Thank you for reading and commenting! I actually had the opposite problem with the sounds on my end. They were extremely low on my computer for some reason. Maybe I should put a warning on there or something.












