1. Textual diarrhea - brevity is the soul of wit. if you’re going to vomit up all your half-baked thoughts, at least employ a line break every once in a while. 2. I don’t think you have any idea what a logo is or what makes for a good logo. 3. Seriously. This is an illustration that you’re describing. 4. Learn the difference between “your” and “you’re”.
My favorite part is how it takes half of the wall of text before he (it’s totally a dude-bro, guys. You know this.) even gets to the part that could (if simplified) maybe qualify as being a logo. Get a grip, bro.












