can you vague about what the fic was, or what it got very wrong, you know, for the writers out there
Ho boi, I actually rather not because they seems to be popular ways to do it like I’ve seen a lot post with lot of notes that listed all the stuff that should have happened and most of it was ticked right out of my list. But you know what? that post is already kind of a vague venting I might as well venting it here to, even though I’m likely to get into trouble later. Please note that this all are not from the single fic and it definitely isn’t something “The writers out there should look out for” Because these are just stuff that iffy with me. It’s me, okay? It’s maybe just me.
also forgot that I should mentioned that I’m talking about Bleach fic ;w;
- Ichigo stays in Soul Society willingly. [Worse if Isshin stays too] Like I get it. Narrative-wise he should stay but god damn it at least make it so that it looks like the inevitable or sort of a sacrifice he has to make not just “Welp, life suck I gonna be with the death now” what the fuck? Ichigo.
-The friends are okay and supportive with Ichigo stays in SS willingly. Okay, Ichigo can be a dickhead and do that but like…have some consequence.
- Ishida and Ryuken magically reconciled on the spot. Quoting Ishida from one of my all time favourite fix-it(???not sure if counted) fic though not word by word; “Just a single arrow wouldn’t justified everything he had done” or something along that line. That fic probably handle post war Ishida the best. and I know not all Fix-it fic is Ishida-centric and be that focus on him, they probably just want to throw this out and be done with it but it’s just so Bizarre to see they reconciled that easily.
-Ishida stays with the Quincy after the war willingly. Basically the same stuff I said about Ichigo.
-Not major thing but just a nitpicking, Post war Ishida function perfectly fine, like nothing had happened. I love Ishida okay? I think he deserved better but one of the think I insisted that really should happen is the consequence of him joining the enemy side, it can be variant from just guilt, PTSD, friends not fully forgive him or even death. I even think the canon Ishida actually suffering that consequence, even though a lot of you guys doesn’t seem to think it is.(Narita have mercy)
- *deep inhale and pauses to recomposed herself* Ishi//nemu….after nemu died and turn into a child. Honestly I would kill Ishida with my bare hand if that’s path he choose.
-A fix-it fic took place after 686 or in between and treat Ichi///hime like a dirt. I don’t ship that ship, I kinda on the opposite side of shipping said ship but you know what. Both Ichigo and Orihime are good person and there’s a big different between a non perfect marriage with some hidden problem but they still love each other and “WHY ARE THEY EVEN COUple in THe firsT PLAcE, ICHIGO HATES ORIHIME IN ThIS, WTF!?” Another one of the fix-it fic I like is an Ichi//ruki fic, took places after 686 but it treated Ichi//hime respectfully, in fact those two are beautifully written I actually cried. A lot of fic actually do this right but there’re some that go for the later and it’s just upsetting, just don’t make them a couple in the first place, damnit!
- Basically 686 just changed it to the ship you like, like I would be iffy too if Ishihime happened but it jump right from that to this without good explanation.
-A fic that took time to fix the stories but everything stays the same like at the end, probably the one I’m okay with the most in the list(other than the Ishida nitpicking one) but just…it still feel like those weird time travel movie man where you’re like “We changed everything! and yet the ending is still the same”
