I finally could update my blurb for my WIP ‘Temper’ -- I added a short description for sections 4 and 5. I’m trying (ahahahahah) to wrap up the sixth and final section these days, but OH WELL LIFE!
Anyway, please check it out here. Each section and main character has its own moodboard, enjoy! (+18 readers only please -- sensitive and explicit contents ahead!).
“Temper” takes place in Tokyo. It tells the story of Italy-born Lana Martin, a business consultant in her late thirties, whose unapologetic attitude makes her both respected and resented at work. One night, although he catches her by surprise, she accepts the special – some would say, indecent – proposal made by her broody and volatile martial arts instructor, Honda.
This unexpected opportunity to dig into her deep-set desires takes an even more surprising turn when his wife, Yuki, inserts herself in the picture. But what could have been merely a torrid lust affair between creative lovers turns into something more intricate and challenging that will change their lives forever.
Nature and hostile powers - of the natural and supernatural kind - force the protagonists to confront their deepest traumas, lifelong mortal enemies, and at the end, themselves.
I’m always happy to swap beta reading/critiques with anyone out there working on their WIPs. Mine is long so don’t feel shy if yours is too, and you hesitate dumping such a big boy on the lap of anyone.
Lovely people like @authorisada @xanawrites @lioness--hart @alittle-writer @theguildedtypewriter have already given, or will give it a try, but I hope to collect the feedback of a few more people. Overall feedback is perfectly fine as well! Thank you dear friends, you have no idea how grateful I am.
