squiddity3 replied to your post
Now, see, I didn't know it existed and now I want to know more. :p
Pff well thanks, I mean if you’re really interested most is online (I think it’s the most recent edit? Not sure.) and I can post the rest by request, but some warnings first:
I started writing without plot, just wanting to see where it goes, then later tried to add plot. The characters were underdeveloped (which I tried to correct) and there were way too many of them (which I did not try to correct). Despite constant rewriting I am of the opinion that I succeeded in none of these areas.
Also at 12 it sort of developed into a story where ‘fantasy species is discriminated against’ and everyone is white and straight. I later learned better, tried to add diversity in, and learn about racism and actually make real world references to the matter, but in the end the reason I dropped the novel was because I decided this wasn’t a story I should be telling (I’m sorry that took so long, it’d been a thing for maybe 8 years by then and I had attachments, I’m largely indifferent to it now, it doesn’t even feel like a thing i wrote).
The story reached its end chapters before I quit.
It just wasn’t good. I’m capable of better I think.
So if you want it here you go, but proceed with caution