#stmarysrp

[wanderlust-rph]

Hi Laura, could we have a first look review please? We'd really appreciate it!

Sure thing, love! It’s under the cut.

I liked it that you had a little information about your plot in the description box, it’s faster to decide weather someone likes your roleplay or not. 

Now what did like a lot was the calendar thing. This has to be the first roleplay I’ve seen to have it and wow, it’s super original and super handy! Big plus for that.

I’ve seen similar plots like yours and I have to say I’m not a big fan of “two school” plots. But that is only my opinion! 

Overall, I liked the whole thing together and I wish you the best luck in future! (:

[antifragiile]

Hey, could we have a shoutout, please? We're an academy RP about two rival schools who are forced to merge after one school's campus is burned down in an accident, and we've got tons of open characters. We'd love to have some more people join our little family. Thanks!

[cutetalks-blog]

Hi could we please have an opinion? Thank you in advance :)

First thing I spot, fresh cut grass. I feel like Hermione Granger when I say that I adore the crisp look and smell of freshly cut grass. So I guess you could say this RP is super fresh. The combination of two schools in karmatic twist to the downfall of one is a wonderful plot, and not many have pulled it off successfully. The posts are clear cut and well formatted, especially the activity checks. The admins sign off with every post, so you know who to talk to for questions and I think that's nice that they chose that over admin gifs: it's nice to change it up and it doesn't take a fc from any RP'ers. The graphics are cute, and the plot preview on every graphic is great for promoing! The bios are indepth and well thought out, and I hope you all check out this amazing school RP!

[totalyspies]

Hi Elle, could we get your opinion on our group, please?

Sorry this wasn’t done earlier, I didn’t see it. But hi and yes under the cut.

Okay okay, the theme is like iffy to me. I like the scrolly thing at the bottom and everything but maybe make the sidebar have a gradient or something. Also, make the icon different than the sidebar, too much of the same thing. Maybe make the font different for the pictures in the scroll thing. It’s all kind of basic and changing it a little bit would make it a lot better. Omg wait I love how everything changes when you click to students. It’s really cool. Your bios are perfect too. On second thought I would just make the icon different and then everything will be perfect.

[tcmnlinson]

Hi Bambi! Could we have your opinion on our group please?

Yeup. As always, keep in mind these are my opinions and mine alone, so don’t take anything to heart and please don’t be offended. It’s all meant as constructive criticism. Under the cut as usual!

Looking at your page, it's extremely boring. The sidebar is pretty enough, but way too simple for me. As I thought, the plot is centered around a school. Which is okay enough in itself, but I liked that you added some rivalry between two schools to push some life into it. It's honestly pretty overused but whatever. I see you've been open since April! Nice going.

I like your bios and your navi page, which is neat and cute. I especially like that you have a separate page for when submitting an app, that's p cool.

All in all, it's really not my type of roleplay, but it's cute and obviously works well so ten points to you. 

[saoirse-rph]

Hi Hannah! Could we trouble you for an opinion on our group? Thank you in advance

It’s no trouble at all! 

By reading the plot I like how it’s not just the typical boarding school roleplay, there is something interesting huzzar! I love that you created the idea of using two rivalry schools and putting them together because it could certainly create interesting plots between roleplayers.

The links with the pictures, can I just..I love that idea. I haven’t seen anything like it, and the idea is organized and clever and yes.

The theme is quite sophisticated and  personally I think it fits in well, however I don’t think the graphics could use a bit of work. At the moment they just look like pictures you bugged together, for a group you want to make them look some what similar. Add a couple of textures, overlay a few things (If you don’t have photoshop, there are plenty of rph’s willing to help with that!) 

It biographies look a good length but I’m not sure if I like how they are in first person answering the questions. It’s unique to say the least. You have a good range of underused and overused fc’s and I think maybe just add in a few more POC but overall good job on the fc front. 

Overall I think this definitely has potential and with a few things fixing it could be rocking! Hope you have a wonderful day and good luck with it all