#swordrp

[hydrasinnocentxarchive]

I’m Backbackback

POST BLIP VERSE

Holland, a 24 year old comes back from the blip with as little as she left. She managed to find some contacts in Madripoor and has started her own money laundering business between Madripoor and the US. Everything seems to be going well but all the attention on super soldiers is making her nervous. She tries to keep out of everything going on but being a super soldier by birth she knows when to use her strength when necessary. 

[sammie-moore]

Hi Leila! We're a new superhero rp based off of Marvel/DC Comics and we were wondering if you'd give us an opinion? Thank you in advance!

Yeah, of course! Let’s start with the theme and graphics, shall we? The graphics are really, really great! I love that there is Wonder Woman in them, because she’s my homegirl. I like the little collage of pictures it is. Also, it definitely has that “superhero” feel. I also love the sidebars and the different pieces of information in displays. I really have no complaints towards your theme and stuff!

Moving on, navigation - I don’t like that it’s this little thing up in the corner. It took me forever to figure out that the directory was the full navigation. I would just change the link name to “navigation,” because it helps for people like me! Otherwise, the navigation is very organized, and I can find my way around the page. I would recommend making a mobile navigation page, though. As for the plot, I really like the idea of the superheroes and the villains switching places. It’s a refreshing new start for the Marvel/DC rps that you usually see! I think it’s a brilliant idea. I would just recommend going back and writing in a name for the device that is being used. That way you don’t have to clarify which device you’re talking about every time you mention it in the plot! Also, there were some grammatical/spelling errors that I caught, but that doesn’t mean too much.

As for the rules, I think you really covered everything. I really like that in an rp. I think it makes you really look at the rules and discover things that you may or may not be able to do. The only thing I would change is adding in a triggers list! As well as your characters being really in depth, you seem to really follow the canon stories of some of the characters - which is wonderful!

Overall, this is a super intriguing roleplay, and I would join myself if I knew more about the DC/Marvel universes! I think that this will go in my rec tag, because you guys know what you’re doing.

[ingridofrph]

Hello there! We're a brand new rp based off of Marvel/ DC Comics. We were wondering if we could get an opinion please?

Of course, please remember this is only my opinion and is not meant to upset/hurt anyone. Okay so at first the graphics kind of threw me off, I wasn’t sure what I was looking at but as time went on I actually grew to really like them for this type of a rp. For some reason the white right under the graphic is throwing me off, but that’s a completely easy fix! The plot is very creative and I’m actually in love with it and that admin that I’ve seen on the dash seems like a sweetheart. Overall, I think this is a great rp and all the people that love Marvel and Comics should go and apply! Good luck cuties, it’s a great idea already.