OH. MY. GODDESS. wher do I even START?!?? This storie had me gripping my phone like it was a lifline and screamin into my pillow every five minutes!! It’s givving emotional devestation but like, in the BEST way possible???? loving this angst!
First offf the way you dropped us right into that pure panic moment with the CDT stickk??? i was imediately sweating. swear my heart was racin like I was the one standing there, ugly cryin on the bathroom floor. And the wayy you described her wholeee mental spiral?? Babe, I FELT that. Like, helloo?? Googling “false positive CDT” like as if she was looking up something about her period and diagnosing herself via google?? Relatable content fr 🫠.
And THEN the family stufff??? Ugh, it hurt in that very spesific way only family disapointment can. I wanted to jump into the storie, snatch her mom’s phone and yeet it into the sun. Like ma’am??? HUG. YOUR. CHILD. YOU. COLD. BISSSSHHHH!!! 🥲🥲
But also THE DOCTORRR??? pls pedros character has no right being that much of a walking contradction. Like sir can you not be terrifying and weirdly comforting at the same time?? It’s confusing for my emotion?? (Also… am I suposed to be blushingg at a medical exam?? Because I was. no thought, just “Is he gonna fuck her? ohh shit theyre gonna fuckk and her moms just outside 😳😳.”)
The way every little smell and feeling was sooooo detailed that I could literally taste the sterile hospital air and feel the awful cold chair under my butt?? REAL AF (i suffer with chronic shit so i am there often).
AND GURL the breakdownn when she’s begging her mom at the hospital door?? SOBBING. no joke. legit tears. I was ready to assemble an army of feral besties to storm that hospital and rescue her myself, hair up, earrings off. 🫡
The writing just hit so hard like, it’s so like painfully real (i mean i do have a crush on a nurse at my local clinic, he fine af). You made the whole "struggling against who the world says you gotta be" thing feel so personal And her messy thoughts being all over the place?? Chef’s kissss mwuah!💋
pls if I had one lil wish?? Maybe just like, a teensy bit more breathin room between the angst, like throw the girl (and us!!!) a cupcake and a warm puppie for 2 secs to recover before BAM more angst. again i love the angst but jesus have mercy, gimme some fluff or something soon, y/n needs it!
but honestly??? i devoured thiss. 10/10 emotional damage. Would cry and scream again. pls write more immediatelyyy or i will simply perish 🫶✨✨
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Hi Lady Bug 🥹🐞
OMG 🥹🥹 I don’t even know where to start with this comment!! I’m grinning like a fool and lowkey tearing up reading it. THANK YOU for taking the time to write all this 💖💕💞







