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Timely: from cursed clocks to wind-up dresses, clock imps to clocks with faces, here's my collection of vintage timepieces.
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Timely: from cursed clocks to wind-up dresses, clock imps to clocks with faces, here's my collection of vintage timepieces.
When telling time in your language, is there an equivalent to the English phrase "half nine"? NOT "half past nine" or "half to nine," just 1. a fraction and 2. the number.
Yes, and it means 30 minutes PAST nine, 9:30
Yes, and it means 30 minutes BEFORE nine, 8:30
No, my language doesn't have this construction for telling time
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How to subtly show the passage of time in your narrative
For instances where actual concrete numbers would be either jarring or unrealistic for your characters to know, like if they’re castaways in a remote region, prisoners of war, under house arrest and unable to access technology, or any other situation where a character cannot ground themselves in a reliable timeline. Or simply in fantasy settings that don't tell time in concrete numbers.
Giving your readers actual numbers can be jarring, whether it’s explicit measurements of things that invites readers to do the math that you might not have (thus risking plot holes), looking out of place in your narrative style, or giving numbers your characters realistically wouldn’t know.
Things like a 60lb bag of dog food, or an 8ft ladder, or a 2 liter bottle are different. Those are common measurements most people come across in conversation or otherwise. Taking an aside to make sure your readers know that a kiddie wagon is 3.5 feet long is… weird. Unless the story demands that, for some reason, this measurement is critical knowledge.
Passage of time is the same, and even more prone to potential plot holes. If you’re writing a story where time is critical, like characters are on a mission and timing must be perfect, then lacking numbers would be strange.
Anything else, though, and in the real world, we estimate all the time. “It’ll take maybe 45 mins” we say, not “it’ll take maybe 36 mins”.
But if you’re in a situation where characters don’t have clocks and calendars, their estimates should be broader and broader and more hyperbolic. “Talking for hours” “sleeping for days” etc. Otherwise, how do they have an exact sense of how much time has passed, and why is a specific number important? Readers can tell when a character or narrator is being hyperbolic.
If you want to get even more vague and subtle, you can either have characters notice environmental details, or clue the reader in without characters even knowing.
I think I’ve mentioned this already, but my go-to here for cases that last months is characters commenting on how long their hair has gotten, or the narration saying something like, “their hair has grown out over their eyes”.
But there’s a bunch of others
How thick the dust is on their surroundings
If the leaves on the trees have changed colors, grown back in, or fallen off
How long their fingernails are
How chipped nail polish has become
How nasty bruises have faded and changed colors
How much weight they’ve lost or gained
How much mold is on bread, or how much food has been eaten or rotten
How many cobwebs/spiderwebs have appeared
How desiccated the corpses of frogs or lizards have become
How grey their hair is, or their dog’s fur
How many weeds are growing in the sidewalk or in the gutters of their house
How many leaves are covering the lawn
How faded paint has become
How far natural roots have grown out, or hair dye has faded
All of those tend to be a more negative passing of time so here’s some lighthearted ones
How full the refrigerator door has become with children’s drawings
How cluttered the dresser is now with family photos
How worn a favorite pair of jeans/shoes or sweater is
How big kittens or puppies have grown
How many baby clothes don’t fit anymore
How many gummy fingerprints are all over the sliding glass doors
How worn the couch cushions are
How the floor is all scratched from dog nails or toy wheels
How much fur is everywhere
No matter what, even if characters do have clocks and calendars at the ready, you can still be subtle about it. Yet another example of showing, instead of telling, in about the same amount of words.
Fun fact:
Apollo kids know what time it is at all hours of the day, until the sun goes down.
The other day, I was chatting with Kayla while waiting for my next activity, and I had forgotten my watch, so I asked what time it was. Immediately, without looking at anything, she goes "3:27". It was crazy! I pulled out my laptop to check and she was right.
Then, later, I went to Will and, making sure I actually had my watch, asked him the time. 5:30 on the dot.
So, yeah. Apollo kids, you don't need watches and I envy you for it.
–Kally
Telling Time
Mastery is achieved when "telling time" becomes "telling time what to do."
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Objects: Pocket Watches
He wrested the world's whereabouts from the stars, and locked the secret in a pocket watch.