[REDACTED] Frantic Fanfic #4
5 minutes per writer per part, 4 fics. Some ran out of time, I've definitely done a type or two, but posted without editing 🤞
TITLE: Max's misadventures with the elevator man FEATURING THE CHARACTERS: Max, Elevator guy WRITERS: @timasco-tabasco, @existingtm, bardtholem
"But Mooommy he literally is denying my right to eat. He keeps putting these dumb things called 'vegetables' on my 15 thousand dollar Gucci steak because I need this thing called 'vitamins' or whatever Tik Tok health fad he's saw online."
Max didn't really know what he was doing here. One minute he was sent on a mission to check suspicions of 'time traveling building' the next Kane and Reyes ran off to go have a 'super secret higher up conversation' (if you asked him about it, they were probably making out in a broom closet somewhere). And this guy pushed him into an elevator and won't stop whining on the phone.
"No Mommy, you don't get it. He's literally trying to poison me."
Max was about two second away from punching this guy in the nutsack.
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The elevator jerked with a concerning crunch.
Oh. Oh no.
Just as he feared, the lights flickered once, twice, then left them in the dark.
"Mommy? Mommy? Hellooooo?"
Phone not working, then. EMP? Definitely something to keep in mind once they got out. If they got out.
Max watched with horror as the Mommy's boy turned toward him, almost in slow motion.
"What did you push!? Ugh! Right when I was getting to the dramatic part," he whined.
That wasn't the dramatic part?
The boy's mouth twisted in thought. "I gueeessss I can tell you."
Oh, God.
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"He keeps insisting I go to the doctor when I tell him about tuoba mih llet I nehw rotcod eht ot og I gnitsisni speek eH." Here we go, here we go. The moment he has been preparing for. The small pill he took 10 minutes ago seems to be working. He still has agency over himself. The worrisome guy is stuck reversing what he's just done. What triggers the reversal? When will it go back to forward movement? Is the rest of the team doing alright? He has to push away the question of what making out in reverse looks like. Focus on the practical actions to take. He tries to change what the man in front of him is doing. Is he stuck in the decided timeline, or can it be manipulated? He finds a moment when the man is looking at him to wave a hand in front of his face. That didn't do anything. He grabs hi
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