Zephyr is a strategist, a brilliant one, for Xin Ren, a warlordess. Ever since Miasma, a corrupt official, took on the role of regent for Empress Xin Bao, Ren has been working to gather enough forces to free the young empress. Zephyr knows she's talented, and she knows what she needs to do to win, but the complications are unending. No one is who they seem, not the enemy strategist, not her lost family, and not even Zephyr herself.
Plot 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
On one hand, I loved the political, military style of the story. This is a retelling of Romance of the Three Kingdoms, a classical Chinese work, and I've never read one of those before. The strategy is so interesting to read about, and there are so many good plot twists. On the other, one of those plot twists, arguably the biggest one, seems to come out of nowhere. It totally took me by surprise, but it felt rushed, and the context isn't explained enough. I think an extra fifty or so pages dedicated to contextualizing that twist and the new elements it introduces would have helped a lot.
However, I did overall enjoy the plot. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love political fantasy. The way the events of this war unfolded was so interesting, and since the story was through the perspective of an unusually clever character, we as the readers get to be privy to many details we may have missed out on otherwise. The worldbuilding is intriguing, though there's more I'd like to know. There's enough to keep the story afloat, but I do wish there was more about the political system (i.e. how Miasma came to power, who else might have influence over the empress) and the supernatural elements (i.e. the extent of their powers, especially in different forms).
Characters 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
I loved the characters in this book. Zephyr is my favorite kind of main character; calculating, scheming, manipulative, and wholly unashamed of it. She did what she had to do, she was prepared to make sacrifices for the greater good, but that didn't stop her from building connections. Her relationships with other people seem to make her hesitate every once in a while, adding a level of humanity, but there doesn't seem to be the sort of statement that she must choose between being capable of emotions or efficiency.
There are a lot of characters in this book, as there are a lot of moving parts, but the side characters are done well for the sheer number of them. My personal favorites were Crow, Ku, and Tourmaline. Some characters seemed pretty one-dimensional, but I feel like everyone had a little bit of depth to them by the end. Ironically, some characters only got that development after they died, but it added to the emotional weight. The only thing I could say is that Miasma, the antagonist, while she's interesting, doesn't have much depth. It's unclear whether she's seizing control to serve her own, power-hungry ends or if she has a greater reason for her actions.
Writing Style 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
For the most part, I really like the writing, but there were some parts I just couldn't ignore. Most of the book fits the setting, a high fantasy world based on Ancient China, but there are certain lines here and there that are so crazily anachronistic. For example, one of the characters, a more formal one at that, says "Hey, is everything okay?" It's such a modern, casual phrase that it sticks out like a sore thumb, so much so that I was actually stuck on it for a while. If those occasional bits would be fixed, it would greatly help the immersion of the piece.
Also, I briefly mentioned this in the plot area, but this story is pretty rushed. I appreciate when a book is fast-paced, but this just went by way too quickly. For the kinds of developments that were taking place, the story desperately needed to slow down, take a breath, and explain things before moving on. For example, Zephyr plays the role of a double agent for a good portion of the book, but we don't really get to see her earning Miasma's trust. Instead, she's immediately put on the front lines opposing those she supposedly betrayed, and it feels unrealistic. If this book were fifty or a hundred pages longer, I think it would benefit it drastically.
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I did really like this book! I'll definitely be reading the rest of the series, and I loved the characters, especially Zephyr. However, there are certain issues, especially with the pacing, that are pretty glaring looking back. I think the overarching plot and characters did a lot of heavy lifting; looking closely reveals a lot of issues in the smaller details. I would still recommend this book—it did a pretty amazing job with the space it had, I just really wish there was more.
The Author
Joan He: Chinese American, also wrote Descendant of the Crane and The Ones We're Meant to Find, started writing fanfiction because of Spirited Away
The Reviewer
My name is Wonderose; I try to post a review every week, and I do themed recommendations every once in a while. I take suggestions! Check out my about me post for more!
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