I know you said that Kris, Susie, Ralsei, etc. aren’t very fleshed out yet, but I beg of you, regardless of how they turn out to be, please make Susie and Tenna still be friends regardless of how edgy they are.
YES...I feel like there is a scene that is very formed in my head that IS STILL being fleshed out.
but I do feel like they'd still have a bond.
idk I just know the scene starts off like this outside in some balcony (yes a balcony there is a balcony somewhere) where Tenna is taking a smoke break.
I dont think she'd say it this way I'm still figuring out the way she would speak, but this is the gist.
See the thing is that Tenna puts out the cigar after Susie calls him out on it but in the sense that like it's because *she's* there. Not because it's bad for *him* but because he's exposing her to the secondhand smoke.
ANOTHER THING IS that he didn't put it out immediately when she showed up and I think this would get to him because he'd probably catch himself that he didn't. When before he would've already put it out at the first sound of a footstep. To him it'd be a moment of like " Oh my god, who the fuck am I." ( he wouldn't say it like this but this is the general idea) Anyway, It makes him sink deeper into this whole identity crisis. Which is why like the entirety of CH.3 it's just Tenna slowly losing grasp on all of the control he's had while losing more and more of who he was.
I am rambling . I hope...this makes sense...