I really really love your if! It's definitely become one of my favorite.
I'm really captivated by the way you write each one of your character. It's amazing how you make them alive. And this is the first time i've really liked my own mc. Like, it's not just a simple self insert character with shallow characterization. Because the more i read, the more i cared about them. And that picnic scene is adorable!!! My heart can't take it. The way mc reacts and gets confused to how this picnic works makes my heart ache for them. And the training scene with finn just the cherry on top. Everything is soo perfect in the way you describe their dynamic with each other. I can't help but see them as a disfunctional but happy family lol (if something happens to them, i will go on a rampage) . Also each one of the RO is so interesting. Jinwoo is so sexy, and his charm is starting to get to me. And potential angst with Simon just... chef's kiss😘 I think both of them are my favorites so far.
And a little bit scenario ask for you
What if, after finishing their job, MC ends up critically injured? Their legs carry them—almost on instinct—to RO’s front door. Because in that moment, RO is the only thing on their mind. Before MC can even have a second guessing themself, they passed out. What would RO’s reaction be when they find MC collapsed in front of their door, barely conscious and badly injured?
Thank you so much for sending me this. You have no idea how much your message makes me happy 🥰
Each character has their own motivation, agenda, personality and I'm glad it gets across. There are stories with blank MC, but I don't think I can ever write it that way because I always believe MC should be the most interesting character in a story, that's why they're the Main Character.
The picnic scene became the highlight of Chapter 3 for many players. When I wrote it, I wanted to show the dynamic between them, and the scene itself serves as a breathing moment in between more fast-paced or high-stake scenes. I'm so glad you and other players like it.
Thank you for liking Jinwoo and Simon! Expect more sexy menace behavior from Jinwoo and some angst with Simon in next chapter 🤭
Unfortunately, I cannot write the scenario you asked for because something similar will happen in the story in a much later chapter, and I want the players to experience it in the story. But feel free to send me other scenarios you'd like to see!
Once again thank you so much. This message is the highlight of my day!